Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Did you have a back when you were a child?
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, because my country, uh, by way many people right back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 10.0Sugestão: 你重复了考官的问题,而且把“bike”说成了“back”,没有回答自己小时候是否有自行车。先直接回答“有”或“没有”,再补充一条具体信息,例如谁给你买的,或者你通常在哪里骑。注意区分 bike(自行车)和 back(后面;背部)的发音。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small bike when I was about six, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 20.0Sugestão: 你表达了肯定态度,但后面的原因不清楚,且有多处用词和语法错误。可以说明自行车为什么受欢迎,例如价格实惠、方便通勤或有助于锻炼;用 because 或 for example 连接细节。避免填充词,并注意说“many people ride bikes”,而不是“many people right back”。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people ride them to work or use bike-sharing services for short trips.
× Yes, because my country, uh, by way many people right back.
✓ Yes, because many people in my country ride bikes.
原句中的“because my country”后没有完整的主谓结构,“by way many people right back”也无法构成通顺的句子。可以改为“many people in my country ride bikes”,其中“many people”是主语,“ride”是谓语,“bikes”是宾语。