Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也补充了颜色、来源和感受，结构基本完整。注意“back”应为“bike”；“a black bike from my parents”不够自然，可说“a black bike that my parents gave me”或“a black bike from my parents as a birthday present”。描述童年经历时，建议统一使用过去时，例如把“It's”“I love it”改为“it was”“I loved it”。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a black bike that my parents gave me for my birthday, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: 回答表达了明确观点，也给出了用途和原因，但“uh”等填充词以及“very”的重复较多，影响流畅度。“it”应改为复数“they”，因为问题问的是 bikes；“buy something”较笼统，可具体说明买日用品或短途出行。建议先直接回答，再用一两个具体例子支撑观点。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re a convenient way to get around. For example, parents often use them to take their children to school, and people also ride them to nearby shops.

× It's a black bike from my parents. It's my birthday present and I love it.

✓ It was a black bike from my parents. It was my birthday present, and I loved it.

这段话讲的是小时候的自行车，语境是过去，因此描述自行车的颜色、来源和它当时是生日礼物时，应使用一般过去时：把“It's”改为“It was”。“I love it”在语法上可以表示现在仍然喜欢它；为保持整段叙述的过去时一致，这里改为“I loved it”。

× Uh, actually it's very popular in my country because, uh, we can use the bike to, uh, take uh, uh, children to school or, umm, buy something. It's very, it's very convenient.

✓ Actually, bikes are very popular in my country because we can use them to take children to school or buy things. They are very convenient.

前文谈论的是复数“bikes”，因此应使用复数代词“they”，不能用单数代词“it”。相应地，动词也要用“are”，而不是“is”。改写时用“them”指代“bikes”，并用“They are very convenient”保持指代一致。