Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and I learned how to ride a bike with my grandparents. My grandma taught me how to ride a bike when I was at the elementary school.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Yes, I think bikes are popular in Taiwan. You can see many people ride their bikes at a River Band Park and on weekends when I go to play basketball I can also see my people ride their bikes

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 68.0

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题,并保持过去时态一致:把“have”改为“had”。“at the elementary school”应改为“in elementary school”。答案中“ride a bike”重复较多,可以用代词或简洁表达替换;也可以补充一个具体细节,例如学骑车的地点或当时的感受。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandmother taught me to ride it in elementary school, and I remember practising with her in a nearby park.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 56.0

Sugestão: 回答切题,也提供了观察到的例子,但句子较长,缺少标点,且“my people”用法不正确,应改为“many people”。“You can see many people ride”可改为“You can see many people riding”。请确认公园名称;如果想表达河边的公园,可以说“a riverside park”。最后可简要说明骑车受欢迎的原因,让内容更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, cycling is quite popular in Taiwan. I often see people riding along the riverside park, especially at weekends when I go there to play basketball. I think many people enjoy it because it is a convenient way to exercise.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child and I learned how to ride a bike with my grandparents.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I learned how to ride a bike with my grandparents.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历,时间明确发生在过去,因此表示“拥有”也应使用过去式 had,而不是现在式 have。谈论过去的经历时,要确保相关动词的时态与过去时间一致。

Vocabulário

Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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