Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer does not address whether you had a bike, and it is unclear what “help back” means. Answer the question directly with “Yes” or “No,” then add one relevant detail, such as when you rode it or who taught you.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride it, and I used to cycle around the park near my home.

Sugestão: You give a clear opinion and relevant reasons, but “a single pack” is unclear and the pronoun “it” does not clearly refer to bikes. Use a specific phrase such as “cycling” or “bikes,” and add a concrete example to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I think cycling is quite popular in my country because it is healthy and convenient. For example, many people ride bikes to work or use them for exercise in local parks.