Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes I had when I child the bike is a red and have a training wheel. I usually ride back to around the neighborhood.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
I think bikes are popular in our country because China is famous for by By country in the nineteen eighties.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 先直接回答“小时候有自行车”,再用过去时补充颜色、辅助轮和骑车地点。注意语法:说“when I was a child”,用“it was red”描述颜色;“training wheels”通常用复数;“ride around the neighborhood”表示在附近骑车。避免使用不自然的“ride back to around”。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red and had training wheels, so it was easy for me to ride. I usually rode it around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 25.0Sugestão: 先明确回答自行车在中国是否受欢迎,再给出清楚、相关的理由或例子。原句中的“famous for by By country”无法表达清楚,建议删去;如果想提到过去,可以说中国过去有很多自行车。注意使用完整句子,并选择与问题直接相关的细节。
Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are still popular in China, especially in cities. They are convenient for short trips, and many people also use shared bikes to get to work or school.
× Yes I had when I child the bike is a red and have a training wheel.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was red and had training wheels.
原句中“I had”后缺少宾语;“when I child”也缺少谓语动词。可以说“had a bike”和“when I was a child”,并将内容拆成两个完整句子。
× Yes I had when I child the bike is a red and have a training wheel.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was red and had training wheels.
问题询问的是小时候的情况,因此应使用过去时。描述当时的自行车时,应将“is”改为“was”,将“have”改为“had”;“when I child”应改为“when I was a child”。
× Yes I had when I child the bike is a red and have a training wheel.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was red and had training wheels.
“red”在这里是系动词“was”后的表语形容词,不需要冠词,因此不能说“a red”。
× Yes I had when I child the bike is a red and have a training wheel.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was red and had training wheels.
自行车通常有两个辅助轮,因此这里应使用复数“training wheels”,而不是单数“a training wheel”。
× I usually ride back to around the neighborhood.
✓ I usually rode around the neighborhood.
这句话描述的是小时候的习惯,应使用“ride”的过去式“rode”。
× I usually ride back to around the neighborhood.
✓ I usually rode around the neighborhood.
“around the neighborhood”已经表达了在附近骑车的意思,不需要再加“back to”。可以直接说“rode around the neighborhood”。
× I think bikes are popular in our country because China is famous for by By country in the nineteen eighties.
✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because China was famous for bicycles in the 1980s.
“in the 1980s”指过去的时间,因此描述中国当时的情况应使用过去时“was”,而不是现在时“is”。
× I think bikes are popular in our country because China is famous for by By country in the nineteen eighties.
✓ I think bikes are popular in our country because China was famous for bicycles in the 1980s.
“famous for”中的“for”后面直接接表示事物的名词“bicycles”;原句中的“by”在这里多余,应删除。