Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly with “Yes, I did.” Correct the phrase “laughed writing a bike” to “loved riding a bike,” and use the past tense consistently. Add one clear detail about where you learned or what you enjoyed, and avoid fillers and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I learned to ride it when I was about 12. I used to practise in a park near my house. I remember enjoying those rides a lot.

Sugestão: Make your opinion clear at the beginning: say either “Yes, they are” or “No, they aren’t.” Avoid repeating “Europe,” and use natural phrases such as “ride a bike” and “more environmentally friendly.” Support your comparison with a specific reason or example.

Exemplo: No, I don’t think bikes are especially popular in my country. Many people prefer to drive or take the train, particularly when they have to travel a long distance. In comparison, cycling seems more common in some European countries. However, I think it is an environmentally friendly option for short trips.

× It was really enjoyable memory for me.

✓ It was a really enjoyable memory for me.

The singular countable noun memory needs an article. Use a before the phrase really enjoyable memory.

× People usually take a train or drive a car instead of riding a bike compared to other countries such as in Europe in Europe, UK or Netherland.

✓ Compared with people in other countries, such as those in Europe, the UK, and the Netherlands, people in my country usually take a train or drive a car instead of riding a bike.

The original sentence places compared to other countries in a way that makes the comparison unclear. Put the comparison at the beginning and compare people in the country with people in other countries.

× People usually take a train or drive a car instead of riding a bike compared to other countries such as in Europe in Europe, UK or Netherland.

✓ Compared with people in other countries, such as those in Europe, the UK, and the Netherlands, people in my country usually take a train or drive a car instead of riding a bike.

Use the before the name UK. The standard name is the UK, not UK.

× People usually take a train or drive a car instead of riding a bike compared to other countries such as in Europe in Europe, UK or Netherland.

✓ Compared with people in other countries, such as those in Europe, the UK, and the Netherlands, people in my country usually take a train or drive a car instead of riding a bike.

The country's name is the Netherlands, not Netherland. Use the plural form Netherlands.

× I think riding on bike is more eco friendly, so I would say it is a better way.

✓ I think riding a bike is more eco-friendly, so I would say it is a better way.

The usual expression is ride a bike, without the preposition on. Use this verb pattern when describing cycling.

× I think riding on bike is more eco friendly, so I would say it is a better way.

✓ I think riding a bike is more eco-friendly, so I would say it is a better way.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a in the expression ride a bike.