Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答内容切题，也提到了自行车的来源和用途，但时态、词汇和表达错误较多。讲过去的经历时要用过去时，例如用“had”“was”；“自行车”应说“bike”，不是“by”；避免重复“12 years old birthday party”，可改为“for my 12th birthday”。此外，“more healthier”重复使用了比较级，应说“healthier”。建议按“直接回答—补充细节—说明好处”的顺序组织。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My father gave me a bike for my 12th birthday, and I often rode it to school. It was a convenient way to get around and helped me stay healthy.

Sugestão: 回答直接，并用共享单车举例说明，内容具体，逻辑也清楚。主要问题是“by us”应改为“bikes”，并注意主谓一致；“share bikes”不够自然，可用“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”。“more and more popular”可以保留，也可以换成更简洁的“increasingly popular”。建议删去口语填充词“Uh”，并让表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are becoming increasingly popular in my country, partly because bike-sharing services are widely available. For example, I often see people riding shared bikes to school or work, as they are convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，属于过去时间，因此 have 应改为过去式 had。回答过去经历时，注意让动词时态与时间状语保持一致。

× This is my father's gift to me when I was 12 years old birthday party on 12 years old birthday party.

✓ It was a gift from my father for my 12th birthday.

句子描述的是过去收到的礼物，所以 is 应改为 was。讲述过去发生的事情时，应使用过去时态。

× This is my father's gift to me when I was 12 years old birthday party on 12 years old birthday party.

✓ It was a gift from my father for my 12th birthday.

表达“作为生日礼物”时，通常用 for my 12th birthday；原句中的 when 和 on 与后面的 birthday party 组合不正确。建议使用“for + 生日”来说明礼物的用途或缘由。

× This is my father's gift to me when I was 12 years old birthday party on 12 years old birthday party.

✓ It was a gift from my father for my 12th birthday.

原句中“when I was 12 years old birthday party”和“on 12 years old birthday party”结构混乱且重复，导致句意不清。可以用完整、简洁的结构“It was a gift from ... for ...”表达“这是……送给我的……礼物”。

× I often ride this by to go to school.

✓ I often rode this bike to school.

这句话讲的是小时候经常发生的事情，因此 ride 应改为过去式 rode。讲述过去的习惯时，可以用 often 加动词过去式。

× Uh, it can make me have more healthier.

✓ It can make me healthier.

healthier 已经是 healthy 的比较级，不能再在前面加 more。双音节形容词 healthy 的比较级通常使用 -ier 形式。

× Uh, it can make me have more healthier.

✓ It can make me healthier.

make 后面可以接宾语再接形容词，表示“使某人变得……”，结构是 make + 宾语 + 形容词。这里不需要在 make me 后面再加 have。

× Yes, I think by us becoming more and more popular in my country because of the widespread bicycle sharing schemes.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are becoming more and more popular in my country because of the widespread bicycle-sharing schemes.

原句中的“by us becoming”无法正确构成这里所需的主句。应让 bikes 作主语，并用 are becoming 表达“自行车正变得越来越受欢迎”。

× Uh, for example, when I go to school I see many people using share bikes to commute, which is convenient and inexpensive.

✓ For example, when I go to school, I see many people using shared bikes to commute, which is convenient and inexpensive.

这里需要用过去分词 shared 作形容词修饰 bikes，表示“共享的自行车”。注意 shared bikes 中的 shared 不是句子的谓语动词，而是修饰名词的分词。