Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give the story in a clear sequence. Remove repeated words such as “so” and “a see a,” and use the natural phrase “ride my bike to the dentist.” You can finish with a brief result, such as saying you stopped cycling after it was stolen.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I once rode it to the dentist, but unfortunately, someone stole it. I haven’t owned a bike since then.

Sugestão: Your direct answer is clear, but the supporting detail is difficult to follow and repeats the idea of riding in groups. Use a linking phrase such as “For example” and add one specific detail about where or when people cycle. Check the phrasing: say “go cycling” or “ride bikes,” rather than “they are likely to bike.”

Exemplo: Yes, cycling is quite popular in South Korea. For example, many people ride along riverside paths, especially at weekends. Some go with friends or join cycling groups.

× So now I don't have any bike.

✓ So now I don't have a bike.

In this negative sentence, use the article a before the singular countable noun bike. Alternatively, you could say, 'I don't have any bikes.'

× So many people enjoy riding bikes as a group groups they are likely to bike.

✓ So many people enjoy riding bikes in groups, and they are likely to bike.

The original wording repeats group and does not clearly connect the two clauses. Use in groups for the plural meaning, and add and to join the clauses correctly.