Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and directly answers the question, but it is very brief. Add one relevant detail, such as why you did not have a bike or how you usually travelled as a child. Use a natural contraction like “didn’t” if you prefer a more conversational tone.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family usually drove me or I walked to nearby places, so I never really needed one.

Sugestão: You give a clear opinion, but the repeated fillers and phrases such as “by grabbing bikes” and “visit to our major” make your meaning difficult to follow. State your opinion once, then explain that people use bikes to visit relatives or commute to work. Use accurate phrases such as “ride a bike,” “visit relatives,” and “go to work,” and connect your ideas with “for example” or “because.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, especially in cities. People ride them because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, they can cycle to work or visit relatives who live nearby.

× Yes, I can see that bikes are popular in our city, uh, in our country because, uh, because by by grabbing bikes will be visit to our major, we visit to our relatives or go to our job places.

✓ Yes, I can see that bikes are popular in our country because we can ride them to visit our relatives or go to work.

The phrase 'will be visit' is not grammatically formed: after 'will', use the base form of the verb, as in 'will visit'. In this answer, 'can ride' clearly expresses how bikes help people get around. Avoid repeating words such as 'by by', and use 'ride bikes' rather than 'grab bikes' for this meaning.

× Yes, I can see that bikes are popular in our city, uh, in our country because, uh, because by by grabbing bikes will be visit to our major, we visit to our relatives or go to our job places.

✓ Yes, I can see that bikes are popular in our country because we can ride them to visit our relatives or go to work.

The verb 'visit' takes a direct object, so do not use 'to' before the person or place being visited. Say 'visit our relatives', not 'visit to our relatives'. You can also say 'go to work' instead of 'go to our job places' for a more natural expression.