Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接，但时态和表达不够自然。若强调从12岁起一直拥有这辆自行车，可以说“have had ... since”；若强调12岁时收到自行车，可以说“got ... when I was 12”。“my gift given by my parents”表达重复，改为“a gift from my parents”。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was 12, as a gift from my parents, and I rode it to school almost every day.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也尝试说明原因，但有较多填充词，影响流畅度。“young generation”应改为“young people”，“taking bicycle”可改为“cycling”或“riding bikes”。结尾的“keep safe and healthy”与骑车的关系不够准确；可以具体说明骑车有助于锻炼身体、节省交通费用或减少污染。注意使用连接词串联理由。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. More and more young people in my country cycle to work, especially in cities. It’s an affordable way to get around, and it also helps them stay fit and reduce their carbon footprint.

× Yes, I had my bike since I was 12 years old and that was my gift given by my parents.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was 12 years old, and it was a gift from my parents.

问题在于“had ... since”不适合表达一个已经结束的童年经历。这里是在回忆过去某个年龄时的情况，用一般过去时“had”和“when”更合适。可以用“have had ... since”表示从过去持续到现在，但这与题目询问的童年经历不完全匹配。

× In my country more and more young generation, uh, are keen on uh, taking bicycle to go to work so that it may be the great choice to help them keep safe and healthy.

✓ In my country, more and more young people are keen on taking a bicycle to work, as it can be a great choice that helps them stay safe and healthy.

“more and more”表示数量不断增加，后面应接可数名词复数或复数表达。原句中的“young generation”与“are”搭配不当；可改为复数表达“young people”，并保留复数动词“are”。

× In my country more and more young generation, uh, are keen on uh, taking bicycle to go to work so that it may be the great choice to help them keep safe and healthy.

✓ In my country, more and more young people are keen on taking a bicycle to work, as it can be a great choice that helps them stay safe and healthy.

“bicycle”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词；此处应说“a bicycle”。记住：单数可数名词通常不能单独使用。

× In my country more and more young generation, uh, are keen on uh, taking bicycle to go to work so that it may be the great choice to help them keep safe and healthy.

✓ In my country, more and more young people are keen on taking a bicycle to work, as it can be a great choice that helps them stay safe and healthy.

“great choice”在这里泛指一种不错的选择，不是双方都已明确知道的特定选择，因此应使用不定冠词“a”，而不是定冠词“the”。