Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答小时候是否有自行车，并统一使用过去时。说明是谁送的，再用清楚、具体的细节解释骑车时为什么不舒服。注意语法：用“when I was a child”，而不是“when I was child”；用“my father gave it to me”，而不是“it's my father's gave me”。“I am totally a fat guy”表达不自然，也可能显得不礼貌，可以改为“我当时身材比较壮”。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me, but it was a little too small for me. I was quite a big kid, so I felt cramped and uncomfortable when I rode it.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也提到了共享单车及其优点，但需要修正语法并让因果关系更自然。可以说“there are a lot of bike-sharing services”和“ride a bike to commute to work”；“more cheaper”应改为“cheaper”。最后一句可表达为“自行车不会排放废气，因此有助于减少空气污染”，避免使用含义不清的“released few no steam”。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where bike-sharing services are widely available. Many people ride them to work or school because cycling is often cheaper than driving and can be quicker in heavy traffic. It also produces no exhaust fumes, so it helps reduce air pollution.

× Yeah, I have a bike.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike.

问题询问的是你小时候有没有自行车，时间明确发生在过去，所以应使用一般过去时 had，而不是现在时 have。回答过去经历时，注意让动词时态与问题中的时间一致。

× When I was child, it's my father's gave me.

✓ When I was a child, my father gave it to me.

child 是可数名词单数，前面通常需要加冠词 a。可以记住表达“我是一个孩子”时说 a child。

× When I was child, it's my father's gave me.

✓ When I was a child, my father gave it to me.

句子讲的是小时候父亲把自行车给你的事情，属于过去发生的动作，应使用 gave。避免在叙述过去时使用现在时 is。

× When I was child, it's my father's gave me.

✓ When I was a child, my father gave it to me.

“it's my father's gave me”把所有格 my father's 和动词 gave 错误地组合在一起，句子缺少清晰的主谓结构。表达“父亲把它给了我”时，可用“my father gave it to me”。

× And to be honest, I think this bike is small for me because at that time I am totally a fat guy.

✓ And to be honest, I think that bike was small for me because, at that time, I was a fat guy.

at that time 指过去，因此描述自行车当时的大小和自己当时的状态时，应使用 was，而不是 is 或 am。叙述过去情况时，要保持相关动词的过去时态一致。

× So I sit on my bicycle.

✓ So I sat on my bicycle.

这里继续描述小时候的经历，sit 应改为过去式 sat。注意 sit 的过去式是不规则变化。

× It will make me uncomfortable.

✓ It made me uncomfortable.

句子描述的是过去骑车时的感受，而不是将来会发生的事情，因此应使用过去式 made，而不是将来表达 will make。

× Yeah absolutely, because in my country there has a lot of bike sharing.

✓ Yeah, absolutely, because there are a lot of bike-sharing services in my country.

表示“有很多共享单车服务”时，应使用 there be 句型。services 是复数，因此用 there are；不能用 there has 来表示“有”。

× People often ride a bike to continue to work and go to school which is more cheaper and faster.

✓ People often ride a bike to continue to work and go to school, which is cheaper and faster.

cheaper 已经是 cheap 的比较级，前面不能再加 more。比较级通常用“-er”或 more 其中一种形式，不能重复使用。

× And it released few no steam so it will protect the air.

✓ And it releases no emissions, so it helps protect the air.

这里是在说明共享单车的一般特点及其对空气的影响，应使用一般现在时。主语 it 是第三人称单数，因此用 releases 和 helps，而不是过去式 released 或将来表达 will protect。

× And it released few no steam so it will protect the air.

✓ And it releases no emissions, so it helps protect the air.

few 不能和 no 这样连用来表达“没有排放物”。要表达完全没有，可以直接用 no，例如 no emissions；描述污染物时，emissions 比 steam 更符合此处语境。