Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답한 점은 좋지만, ‘interesting on me’는 자연스럽지 않은 표현입니다. 과거 경험을 말할 때는 ‘I enjoyed it’ 또는 ‘It was a lot of fun’을 사용하세요. 아버지와 어디에서 탔는지, 그 경험이 왜 기억에 남는지 구체적인 세부 사항을 덧붙이면 답변이 더 풍부해집니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it with my father. We usually cycled in a park near our home. I really enjoyed those rides because they were a fun way to spend time together.

Sugestão: 질문에 맞게 ‘bikes are popular’처럼 복수형으로 답하고, ‘it is’ 대신 ‘they are’를 사용하세요. 현재 예시는 문장이 완성되지 않아 의미를 파악하기 어렵습니다. 서울의 공공 자전거 서비스나 자전거 도로를 구체적인 근거로 들고, ‘for example’로 자연스럽게 연결해 보세요.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in South Korea, especially in Seoul. For example, the city has a public bike-sharing service called Seoul Bike. Many people use it to commute or cycle along the Han River.

× That experience is so interesting on me.

✓ That experience was so interesting to me.

The student is describing a past experience, so the past-tense verb was is appropriate. Use the past tense when describing how the experience felt at that time.

× That experience is so interesting on me.

✓ That experience was so interesting to me.

The usual preposition after interesting when describing someone's reaction is to, not on. Use interesting to me.

× Yes, it is very popular.

✓ Yes, they are very popular.

The question asks about bikes, a plural noun, so the pronoun should be they rather than it. Make the pronoun match the noun it refers to.

× Uh, for example in Seoul has that has bicycle without any.

✓ For example, there are many bicycles in Seoul.

To say that bicycles exist in a place, use there are followed by a plural noun. Do not use has after in Seoul in this sentence.

× Uh, for example in Seoul has that has bicycle without any.

✓ For example, there are many bicycles in Seoul.

The original sentence contains repeated, disconnected clauses and ends with an incomplete phrase. Use one complete clause with a clear subject and verb, such as there are many bicycles in Seoul.