Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng cần dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán: “It was a present from my parents”. Câu thứ hai có nhiều từ lặp và cấu trúc chưa đúng; hãy nói rõ bạn nhận xe khi nào và đã dùng xe để đi đâu. Có thể nối ý bằng “so” hoặc “I used it to…”.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my birthday, and I used it to ride to school. It was a practical gift, and I really enjoyed cycling.

Sugestão: Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng cấu trúc “Bikes are popular…”, không dùng “is” trước danh từ số nhiều. Tránh lặp từ và sửa cụm diễn đạt chưa rõ “ride a bribe ride by”; có thể giải thích rằng người trẻ đi xe đạp để tập thể dục. Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn họ thường đạp xe ở công viên hoặc vào cuối tuần.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many of them cycle in parks or around their neighbourhoods to stay fit. It is also an enjoyable way to spend time outdoors.

× It is a present of my parent on my birthday and I used it easily use it when to ride to school

✓ It was a present from my parents for my birthday, and I used it to ride to school.

The speaker is describing a childhood event, so the past-tense form was is appropriate instead of is.

× It is a present of my parent on my birthday and I used it easily use it when to ride to school

✓ It was a present from my parents for my birthday, and I used it to ride to school.

Parent refers to more than one person here, so use the plural form parents.

× It is a present of my parent on my birthday and I used it easily use it when to ride to school

✓ It was a present from my parents for my birthday, and I used it to ride to school.

Use from to identify who gave the present and for to describe the occasion. The phrases of my parent and on my birthday do not express these meanings naturally.

× It is a present of my parent on my birthday and I used it easily use it when to ride to school

✓ It was a present from my parents for my birthday, and I used it to ride to school.

The phrase used it easily use it when to ride contains a repeated verb and an incomplete clause. Use used it to ride to express the purpose clearly.

× From my perspective, is bikes are popular in my country among young people.

✓ From my perspective, bikes are popular in my country among young people.

The extra is makes the sentence structure ungrammatical. Bikes is already the subject, and are is the correct verb.

× They can ride a bribe ride by to do exercise to do exercise regularly.

✓ They can ride bikes to exercise regularly.

The original sentence contains repeated and incomplete phrases, which make its structure unclear. Use can ride bikes to state the activity and to exercise regularly to state its purpose.