Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes I had a back as a child it was my favorite toy and I rose it almost every day
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes um my in my country it's very popular bike
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答切题,也提到了自行车对你的意义和使用频率。注意“back”应为“bike”,“rose”应为“rode”;把几个想法用句号或连接词分开,避免句子连在一起。还可以补充一个具体细节,例如你通常在哪里骑车。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was my favorite toy, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 回答了“是”,但句中有重复和停顿(“um my in my”),而且“popular bike”表达不自然。可以说“Bikes are very popular in my country”,再补充一个具体原因或例子,例如人们骑车通勤或锻炼。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities.
× Yes I had a back as a child it was my favorite toy and I rose it almost every day
✓ Yes, I had a back as a child. It was my favorite toy, and I rode it almost every day.
这里描述的是童年时发生的事情,因此需要使用一般过去时。ride 的过去式是 rode,而不是 rose。建议记住不规则动词变化:ride—rode—ridden。
× Yes I had a back as a child it was my favorite toy and I rose it almost every day
✓ Yes, I had a back as a child. It was my favorite toy, and I rode it almost every day.
原句把两个可以独立成句的部分直接连在一起,造成句子结构不完整、阅读不清晰。可以在“child”后用句号分开,并在句首大写“It”。
× Yes um my in my country it's very popular bike
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.
这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物,应使用复数 bikes,并搭配 are。单数可数名词 bike 不能在没有冠词的情况下单独使用。回答时可以直接说:“Bikes are very popular in my country.”