Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và có thêm chi tiết về màu xe, món quà và thời gian học đi xe. Tuy nhiên, cần dùng thì quá khứ vì câu hỏi nói về thời thơ ấu: “I had”, “I received”, “I spent”. Có thể bạn muốn nói “pink bike” chứ không phải “pink pie”; dùng “learn to ride it” thay cho “learn how to write it”, và “every day” thay cho “every days”. Hãy kết nối các ý bằng “I remember…” hoặc “After that…”.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my fifth birthday, if I remember correctly. It took me about a week to learn how to ride it, and after that, I used it almost every day.

Sugestão: Bạn đã đưa ra quan điểm rằng xe đạp phổ biến ở vùng nông thôn và có ví dụ về quê nhà, nhưng câu trả lời hiện chưa rõ nghĩa ở một số chỗ. Mở đầu trực tiếp bằng “Yes, I think bikes are popular…”. Sửa “likes” thành “for example”, “students rides” thành “students ride”, và “to the schools” thành “to school”. Cụm “their early people” chưa tự nhiên; nếu bạn muốn nói người lớn tuổi, hãy dùng “older people”. Nên giải thích ngắn gọn xe đạp được dùng để đi học hoặc đi lại quanh khu phố.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in rural areas of my country. For example, in my hometown, many students ride bicycles to school. Older people also use them to get around the neighborhood because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× Yes, of course I have a pink pie.

✓ Yes, of course, I had a pink pie.

The question asks about a childhood experience, so the answer should use the past tense. Change have to had.

× A pink pie what is I receive in my 5th birthday from my parents if I remember correctly

✓ It was a pink pie that I received on my fifth birthday from my parents, if I remember correctly.

The original is a sentence fragment, and what is does not correctly introduce the information about the pie. Use a complete clause, such as It was a pink pie that I received.

× A pink pie what is I receive in my 5th birthday from my parents if I remember correctly

✓ It was a pink pie that I received on my fifth birthday from my parents, if I remember correctly.

The event happened in the past, so use was and received rather than is and receive.

× A pink pie what is I receive in my 5th birthday from my parents if I remember correctly

✓ It was a pink pie that I received on my fifth birthday from my parents, if I remember correctly.

Use on with a specific birthday: on my fifth birthday. In is not the appropriate preposition here.

× I spend one week to learn how to write it then I use every days.

✓ I spent one week learning how to write it, and then I used it every day.

The speaker is describing a past experience, so spend and use should be in the past tense: spent and used.

× I spend one week to learn how to write it then I use every days.

✓ I spent one week learning how to write it, and then I used it every day.

After spend time, use a verb ending in -ing. Say spent one week learning, not spent one week to learn.

× I spend one week to learn how to write it then I use every days.

✓ I spent one week learning how to write it, and then I used it every day.

The expression every day refers to each individual day, so day should be singular. Every days is incorrect.

× From my past views is usually popular in the rural areas

✓ In my view, bikes are usually popular in rural areas.

The original clause is missing a clear subject and uses an awkward sentence construction. Start with In my view, then state the subject and what is true about it.

× From my past views is usually popular in the rural areas

✓ In my view, bikes are usually popular in rural areas.

Bikes is plural, so it must be followed by are, not is.

× likes in my hometowns students rides a bicycle to the schools and also their early people use is to buy around the neighborhood.

✓ For example, in my hometown, students ride bicycles to school, and elderly people also use them to get around the neighborhood.

The speaker is referring to one hometown, so use the singular hometown rather than hometowns.

× likes in my hometowns students rides a bicycle to the schools and also their early people use is to buy around the neighborhood.

✓ For example, in my hometown, students ride bicycles to school, and elderly people also use them to get around the neighborhood.

Students is plural, so the verb should be ride, not rides.

× likes in my hometowns students rides a bicycle to the schools and also their early people use is to buy around the neighborhood.

✓ For example, in my hometown, students ride bicycles to school, and elderly people also use them to get around the neighborhood.

When talking about school as a general activity or destination, omit the definite article and say go to school or ride to school, not to the schools.

× likes in my hometowns students rides a bicycle to the schools and also their early people use is to buy around the neighborhood.

✓ For example, in my hometown, students ride bicycles to school, and elderly people also use them to get around the neighborhood.

Use them to refer to bicycles. Is cannot function as the object of use in this sentence.