Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the yes/no question directly first, then add a short detail. The meaning of “Sexy years old” and “ride a bag” is unclear; if you mean “six years old” and “ride a bike,” use those phrases. Use the past tense to talk about childhood.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: Give your opinion directly, for example, “Yes, I think they are popular.” Then support it with a clear observation. Use “we can see” rather than “we can,” and say “children riding bikes” instead of “they are all have a rat back.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. You can often see children riding them in the streets and parks, especially in the evenings.

× Sexy years old.

✓ I was six years old.

The original answer is a sentence fragment because it has no verb. Add 'was' to make a complete answer. 'Sexy' appears to be a transcription error for 'six'; this correction assumes the student meant to state their age.

× Maybe I can ride a bag.

✓ Maybe I could ride a bike.

Because the question asks about the student's childhood, 'could' is more appropriate than 'can' to describe past ability. 'Bag' appears to be a transcription error for 'bike'; this is a contextual correction, not a grammar error.

× Around the street we can so many kids, they are all have a rat back.

✓ On the street, we can see many kids; they all have bikes.

After the modal verb 'can,' use a base-form verb. The original phrase 'can so many kids' is missing a verb such as 'see.' 'Rat back' appears to be a transcription error for 'bike'; the correction assumes the student is talking about bikes.

× Around the street we can so many kids, they are all have a rat back.

✓ On the street, we can see many kids; they all have bikes.

The phrase 'they are all have' incorrectly combines 'are' with the main verb 'have.' Remove 'are' and use 'they all have.' A semicolon separates the two complete clauses and avoids joining them with only a comma.