Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly, then explain briefly why you did not have a bike as a child. The phrase about being able to “travel back” is unclear, and “drived” should be “rode” or “drove,” depending on the type of bike. Use “a bike” and avoid adding an uncertain or unrelated explanation. Keep the answer to two or three clear sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I got my first one when I was 18 because I wasn’t allowed to ride one before then. My father had a bike, but I didn’t use it.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes-or-no answer and identify what kind of bike you mean, such as bicycles or motorbikes. Your supporting reason should be understandable and specific; the references to “Big Star,” “spikes,” and “Super PAC” are unclear. Use a linking word such as “because” to connect your reason to your answer, and avoid repeating “in my country.”

Exemplo: Yes, motorbikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around, especially in busy cities. Bicycles are also common for short trips and exercise.

× No, actually I got my first bike when I was 18 because in India there's a element after that you can travel back.

✓ No, actually, I got my first bike when I was 18 because in India there's an element after that you can travel back.

Use an before a word that begins with a vowel sound. Element begins with a vowel sound, so a element should be an element. The meaning of this phrase is unclear, so only the article has been corrected.

× So I cannot actually own bike before the age of 18 yet.

✓ So I couldn't actually own a bike before the age of 18.

The answer describes a past restriction during childhood, so couldn't is more appropriate than cannot. Yet is unnecessary with before the age of 18 in this sentence.

× So I cannot actually own bike before the age of 18 yet.

✓ So I cannot actually own a bike before the age of 18 yet.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike when referring to any one bike.

× My father has one, but I never drived because I was enraged.

✓ My father has one, but I never drove because I was enraged.

Drive is an irregular verb. Its simple past form is drove, not drived.

× Yeah, actually Big Star, very popular in my country, goes in my country every other citizen is middle class, so every other person has spikes.

✓ Yeah, actually, bikes are very popular in my country. Every other citizen is middle class, so every other person has a bike.

The phrase very popular in my country does not have a subject and a finite verb as originally stated. The correction gives the idea a clear subject, bikes, and verb, are. The original wording is unclear in places, so this correction addresses the apparent grammar issue without interpreting the unclear phrase.

× And here is also very people are very pleased for Super PAC actually.

✓ And there are also many people here who are very pleased with Super PAC, actually.

Use there are to introduce plural people. Here is does not correctly introduce the plural noun people.

× And here is also very people are very pleased for Super PAC actually.

✓ And there are also many people here who are very pleased with Super PAC, actually.

Very does not quantify people. Use many with the plural countable noun people.

× And here is also very people are very pleased for Super PAC actually.

✓ And there are also many people here who are very pleased with Super PAC, actually.

The usual preposition after pleased when describing a positive reaction to something is with, not for.