Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give one clear supporting detail. Use “used to ride a bike” rather than “used to biking,” and say “when I was a child” and “one of my favourite activities.” The final sentence is unclear, so explain simply what you enjoyed about cycling. Avoid repeated words and fillers.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it quite often. Cycling with my friends was one of my favourite activities because it was fun and gave us a chance to explore our neighbourhood. I don’t ride much these days.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes-or-no opinion first, then support it with a specific reason or example. Correct “it wasn’t popular like now” to “they weren’t as popular as they are now,” and use “competitions” to match the plural meaning. The phrase “Samsung ceremony” is unclear; replace it with the event or activity you intended to mention. Avoid restarting the sentence.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are more popular in my country than they used to be. More people cycle for exercise and recreation, and cycling competitions have also attracted public attention. However, the popularity of cycling varies from place to place.

× I used to biking a lot.

✓ I used to bike a lot.

After used to, use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Use used to bike.

× When I was child, one of one of my favorite activity was biking with my friend.

✓ When I was a child, one of my favorite activities was biking with my friend.

Use the article a before the singular countable noun child. The phrase one of is followed by a plural noun, so use activities. The repeated one of appears to be a speech repetition and is omitted in the correction.

× Actually that activity turns my simple outgoing to a interesting and fun activity with my friend.

✓ Actually, that activity turned a simple outing with my friend into an interesting and fun activity.

The speaker is describing a childhood experience, so the past-tense verb turned is appropriate instead of turns.

× Actually that activity turns my simple outgoing to a interesting and fun activity with my friend.

✓ Actually, that activity turned a simple outing with my friend into an interesting and fun activity.

Use turn something into something to describe a change. Turn something to something is not the correct preposition pattern here.

× Actually that activity turns my simple outgoing to a interesting and fun activity with my friend.

✓ Actually, that activity turned a simple outing with my friend into an interesting and fun activity.

Use an before a word that begins with a vowel sound, such as interesting. The correction also uses a before the singular countable noun activity.

× Actually, in the past it wasn't popular like now.

✓ Actually, in the past it wasn't as popular as it is now.

To compare equal qualities in a negative sentence, use the pattern not as + adjective + as. Include it is now to make the comparison clear.

× There are a lot of international competition which are related to biking and making most people happy to have a Samsung ceremony and matches like that in our country.

✓ There are a lot of international competitions which are related to biking and making most people happy to have a Samsung ceremony and matches like that in our country.

A lot of is followed by a plural countable noun. Change competition to competitions. The plural relative pronoun which are then agrees with competitions.