Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，再用一两个句子解释原因。注意时态：谈童年经历时使用过去时，例如“I didn’t have”或“I wasn’t”。“have the gift on keeping balance”表达不自然，可说“be good at keeping my balance”。避免重复表达“ability or gift”，并检查不清楚的词组（如“translate toys”）；回答控制在五句话以内。

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I wasn’t very good at keeping my balance, so I found the idea of learning to ride a bit intimidating. I usually played with other toys instead.

Sugestão: 开头要明确回答“现在自行车是否受欢迎”，不要让考官猜测你的观点。你可以用过去和现在作对比，但要避免含义重复的表达，如“the bike, the king, the Kingdom of the bike”。注意语法：“China was famous”或“China used to be known as”；“most people”前不加“of”，“buy cars”比“will use will buy car”更自然。补充一个具体原因或场景，让观点更完整。

Exemplo: Yes, although bikes are less dominant than they used to be in China. In the past, China was often called the “Kingdom of Bicycles,” but many people now prefer cars for longer journeys. However, bikes are still popular for short trips and exercise.

× Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was during my childhood because I'm a person who really didn't have the ability or have the gift on some on keeping balance.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have the ability or the natural gift to keep my balance.

“I was during my childhood”结构不完整且表达重复，可以改为“when I was a child”。这里“I'm a person who...”也让句子显得冗长；直接说“I didn't have...”结构更清楚。

× Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was during my childhood because I'm a person who really didn't have the ability or have the gift on some on keeping balance.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have the ability or the natural gift to keep my balance.

表示“有……方面的天赋”时，通常用“a gift for”，而不是“a gift on”。此处也可以改用更自然的结构“the gift to keep my balance”。

× So not only bike but also motorcycle or car on all of these, uh, translate toys are difficult for me.

✓ So not only bikes but also motorcycles and cars are difficult for me.

这里泛指多种交通工具，应该使用复数形式“bikes”“motorcycles”和“cars”。

× Well, you should think about of the time during the last period.

✓ Well, you should think about the past.

“think about”中的“about”已经是介词，后面不能再加“of”。可以直接说“think about the past”。

× Last decade China was be famous as the bike, the king, the Kingdom of the bike.

✓ Last decade, China was famous as the kingdom of bikes.

“was”已经是过去式，后面不能再接动词原形“be”。描述过去的状态时，使用“was famous”即可。

× Last decade China was be famous as the bike, the king, the Kingdom of the bike.

✓ Last decade, China was famous as the kingdom of bikes.

这里泛指自行车，应使用复数“bikes”，而不是单数“the bike”。

× But actually nowadays most of people will use will buy car instead of bikes.

✓ But actually, nowadays most people buy cars instead of bikes.

“most”后直接接泛指的人群时，应说“most people”，不能说“most of people”。如果使用“most of”，后面通常需要限定词，例如“most of the people”。

× But actually nowadays most of people will use will buy car instead of bikes.

✓ But actually, nowadays most people buy cars instead of bikes.

“will use will buy”把两个谓语结构重复连接在一起，句子结构不正确。根据句意保留“buy”即可。

× But actually nowadays most of people will use will buy car instead of bikes.

✓ But actually, nowadays most people buy cars instead of bikes.

“nowadays”表示当前的普遍情况，通常使用一般现在时，因此应说“people buy”，而不是“will buy”。

× But actually nowadays most of people will use will buy car instead of bikes.

✓ But actually, nowadays most people buy cars instead of bikes.

“most people”表示许多人，后面泛指他们购买的汽车时也应使用复数“cars”，以和“bikes”保持一致。