Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Yeah, I have a bike when I was a child and it is it was bought by my grandma and she told me how to riding a bike in our old house. And I think, I think that memory is, is really.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Well I think bikes are popular in our country because in the street you can see lots of people riding bikes or or E bikes. But bikes are more popular than E bike because they can ride by students.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 42.0

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题,并用过去时描述童年经历。注意语法:用“had”而不是“have”,用“taught me how to ride”而不是“told me how to riding”。避免重复和中途改口;最后补充一个具体感受或细节,让回答完整。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandma bought it for me and taught me how to ride it outside our old house. I was nervous at first, but I soon learned to ride on my own. It’s a lovely memory because I spent a lot of time with her.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 56.0

Sugestão: 开头已经直接回答了问题,可以进一步说明自行车或电动自行车各自受欢迎的原因。注意表达自然准确:用“on the streets”而不是“in the street”,并将“they can ride by students”改为“students can ride them”。“bikes”容易指普通自行车,也可能泛指各类自行车,建议明确区分普通自行车和电动自行车。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see many people riding bicycles and e-bikes on the streets, especially during rush hour. E-bikes are convenient for commuters, while ordinary bicycles are popular with students because they’re affordable and easy to use.

Gramática

5: Past tense issue

× Yeah, I have a bike when I was a child and it is it was bought by my grandma.

✓ Yeah, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was bought by my grandma.

句子讲的是“小时候”的经历,时间已经过去,因此要用一般过去时:have 应改为 had。被动结构中也应使用 was bought;“it is”是说话时的重复或自我修正,应删去。

8: Verb + -ing form

× She told me how to riding a bike in our old house.

✓ She told me how to ride a bike in our old house.

“how to”后面接动词原形,不能接动名词形式。因此 riding 应改为 ride。可以记住:“疑问词 + to + 动词原形”,例如 how to ride。

1: Singular and plural issue

× But bikes are more popular than E bike.

✓ But bikes are more popular than e-bikes.

这里是在比较一类自行车和一类电动自行车,应使用复数形式保持比较对象一致。E bike 应改为 e-bikes。

21: Incorrect passive voice

× Because they can ride by students.

✓ Because they can be ridden by students.

原句中 by students 表示“由学生骑”,所以需要使用被动语态。含情态动词 can 的被动结构是“can + be + 过去分词”,因此应将 ride 改为 be ridden。

Vocabulário

Old— Elderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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