Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也提供了生日礼物和在公园骑车的具体细节。注意使用正确的搭配和过去时：说“learned to ride a bike”，而不是“learned it”；童年经历应使用“rode”，而不是“ride”；“quicker”在这里应改为“faster”。另外，可精简重复出现的“my mother”。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My mother gave it to me for my 11th birthday and taught me how to ride it. I often rode it in the park near our home, and she said I was faster than most of the other children.

Sugestão: 观点明确，但回答在最后一句中断，例子没有表达完整。注意名词复数和自然表达：用“shared bikes”和“in urban and rural areas”；“pay cheaper”应改为“pay less”。可以补全关于骑行俱乐部的例子，并用“For example”连接具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in China, especially shared bikes, which are available in many urban and rural areas. They are an affordable way to get around. There are also many cycling clubs; for example, my sister used to ride with one on weekends.

× I often ride a bike in my childhood at the park near my home.

✓ I often rode a bike in my childhood at the park near my home.

“in my childhood”指过去的童年时期，因此描述当时经常做的事应使用一般过去时。把“ride”改为过去式“rode”。

× My mom said that I was quite quicker than other children.

✓ My mom said that I was much quicker than other children.

“quicker”是比较级，通常用“much”来加强比较程度；“quite”一般不这样修饰比较级。可以记住“much + 比较级”的搭配。

× In China there are shared bike around the urban and even the rural areas.

✓ In China, there are shared bikes around urban and even rural areas.

“there are”后面需要接复数名词，因此“bike”应改为“bikes”。谈论一般意义上的城市和农村地区时，通常不需要在“urban areas”和“rural areas”前加“the”。

× People often pay cheaper to ride the shared bike.

✓ People often pay less to ride shared bikes.

“cheaper”是形容词比较级，不能直接修饰动词“pay”。这里要表达“付更少的钱”，应用“pay less”。

× For example, my sister often joined a.

✓ For example, my sister often joined a biking club.

冠词“a”后面需要接单数可数名词，原句在“a”后缺少名词，句子没有表达完整。可以补上“biking club”等名词，使意思完整。