Bike— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, unfortunately I had a bike when I was a little child. My dad gave me a brand new bicep because I have a good rate and of course he wanted me to learn how to write and I was very excited.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Of course yes, I live in now and multiple are very popular in my country. There are millions of motorbikes especially in big city like Ho Chi Minh City where we will use them for daily community. Community has to work because they are convenient and can navigate heavy traffic.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng “unfortunately” không phù hợp với ý tích cực là bạn hào hứng. Một số từ/cụm từ chưa chính xác hoặc khó hiểu, chẳng hạn “bicep”, “good rate” và “learn how to write”; hãy dùng từ đúng như “bicycle”, “good grades” (nếu muốn nói về điểm số) và “learn how to ride”. Câu trả lời cũng hơi dài và nối nhiều ý bằng “and”; nên chia thành các câu ngắn, thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về chiếc xe hoặc cảm xúc của bạn.
Exemplo: Yes, I did. My dad gave me a brand-new bicycle when I was little because he wanted me to learn how to ride. I was really excited, and I used to ride it around our neighbourhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: Bạn có nêu được ý chính và lý do, nhưng câu “I live in now” chưa rõ nghĩa; hãy trả lời thẳng “Yes, they are very popular in my country.” Phân biệt “bikes” với “motorbikes” nếu bạn đang nói về xe máy. Sửa các cụm chưa tự nhiên như “multiple”, “daily community” và “Community has to work” thành “many”, “daily commutes” và “commuters”. Nên dùng dạng hiện tại để nói về thói quen chung và thêm ví dụ cụ thể về giao thông ở thành phố lớn.
Exemplo: Yes, motorbikes are extremely popular in Vietnam. There are millions of them, especially in big cities like Ho Chi Minh City. Many people use them for their daily commute because they are convenient and can weave through heavy traffic.
Gramática
× My dad gave me a brand new bicep because I have a good rate and of course he wanted me to learn how to write and I was very excited.
✓ My dad gave me a brand new bicep because I had a good rate, and of course he wanted me to learn how to write, and I was very excited.
The sentence describes events and circumstances in the past, so have should be changed to had to keep the verb tense consistent. The words bicep, rate, and write may be transcription or vocabulary issues, so they are not changed here.
× There are millions of motorbikes especially in big city like Ho Chi Minh City where we will use them for daily community.
✓ There are millions of motorbikes, especially in big cities like Ho Chi Minh City where we will use them for daily community.
The phrase refers to cities in general, so the plural form big cities is appropriate. If you mean one city, use a big city instead. The word community may be a vocabulary or transcription issue, so it is not corrected here.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)