Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答问题，再用一两句补充具体信息。注意语法：可说“my father bought me a bike”和“it was stolen last year”，而不是“had bought”或“it lost”。“somebody saved the fat”意思不清楚；如果想表达“有人偷了它”，应说“someone stole it”。最后一句与童年骑车的联系不够明确，可说明它带给你的回忆或帮助。减少“uh”等填充词，并使用过去时描述童年经历。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I rode it around my neighborhood with my friends. Unfortunately, it was stolen last year, so I still feel sad about losing it.

Sugestão: 回答方向明确，也提到了共享单车的便利和价格，但答案在句尾中断，且“shared bags system”用词错误，应为“bike-sharing system”。避免重复“scan that”，可说“scan the QR code”。补充具体人群或使用场景，并用连接词组织理由；控制在五句以内，让回答完整自然。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially shared bikes. People can scan a QR code to rent one from the roadside, which is convenient and inexpensive. Many people use them for short trips to work or to nearby shops.

× Yes, my father had bought me a bike when I was a child, but it lost, uh, in the last year because maybe somebody saved the fat, saved it.

✓ Yes, my father had bought me a bike when I was a child, but it was lost, uh, in the last year because maybe somebody saved the fat, saved it.

这里的 it 指自行车，是“丢失”的对象，不能直接说 it lost。应使用被动结构“it was lost”。更自然的说法是“it got lost”。

× Yes, my father had bought me a bike when I was a child, but it lost, uh, in the last year because maybe somebody saved the fat, saved it.

✓ Yes, my father had bought me a bike when I was a child, but it lost, uh, last year because maybe somebody saved the fat, saved it.

表示“去年”时，last year 前面通常不加介词 in。应直接说“last year”。

× And then I think it's pretty valuable for me because it's, uh, it's really important when I, uh, communicating and socializing.

✓ And then I think it's pretty valuable for me because it's, uh, it's really important when I, uh, am communicating and socializing.

when 引导的从句需要完整的谓语结构。原句的“I communicating”缺少助动词 am。现在进行时的结构是“主语 + am/is/are + 动词-ing”，因此应说“I am communicating and socializing”。