Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly, then add one clear supporting detail. Avoid repetition, such as “I really I really,” and correct “writing a scooter” to “riding a scooter.” The phrase “which made a really great memory” is unnatural; say “which created some wonderful childhood memories” instead. You could also explain briefly why you enjoyed riding it.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I did have a scooter. I really enjoyed riding it in the park near my home, especially at weekends. It was a fun way to spend time outdoors and created some wonderful childhood memories.

Sugestão: State your main answer clearly at the beginning, for example, “No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country.” Correct the parallel structure in “prefer to drive cars, either take buses or trains” to “prefer driving cars or taking buses and trains.” Also, “riding a bus” should be “riding a bike,” and “a road for only for bikes” should be “dedicated bike lanes.” Add a specific reason or result to make your answer more developed and coherent.

Exemplo: No, bikes aren’t very popular in my country because most people prefer driving or taking public transport. As a result, traffic and air pollution are serious problems, especially in large cities. I’d like the government to build more dedicated bike lanes so that cycling would be safer and more convenient.

× I really enjoyed spending time writing a a scooter, especially in parks.

✓ I really enjoyed spending time riding a scooter, especially in parks.

The noun scooter is singular and countable, so it needs one indefinite article: a scooter. The article a should not be repeated. Riding is also the appropriate verb for using a scooter.

× People prefer to drive cars, either take buses or trains rather than riding a bus.

✓ People prefer to drive cars, take buses, or take trains rather than ride bikes.

The alternatives should be arranged in a parallel structure. Drive, take, and take are all base-form verbs, and the sentence should clearly contrast these forms of transportation with riding bikes.

× But I would really love if we started riding the bikes and have a road for only for bikes.

✓ But I would really love it if we started riding bikes and had a road only for bikes.

The expression would love it if requires the pronoun it before the if-clause. The original sentence also contains repeated words and an incomplete structure, so the sentence has been reorganized for grammatical clarity.

× If we started riding the bikes

✓ If we started riding bikes

Bikes is a plural noun used in a general sense, so it does not need the definite article the. The phrase riding bikes refers to cycling in general, not to specific bikes.

× If we started riding bikes and have a road only for bikes

✓ If we started riding bikes and had a road only for bikes

The verbs joined by and should use matching tense forms in this hypothetical if-clause. Started is in the past form, so have should also be changed to its past form had.

× A road for only for bikes

✓ A road only for bikes

The preposition for is repeated unnecessarily. The correct phrase is only for bikes, meaning that the road is intended exclusively for bikes.