Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and organize your ideas into three or four clear sentences. Avoid run-on sentences by using full stops and linking words such as “also” and “because.” Use the past tense consistently: say “I rode it” and “It helped me a lot,” rather than “I ride it” and “is helping.” Also, replace the unnatural phrase “to everywhere that I want to go” with “wherever I wanted to go.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. My sister and I often argued over it because we both wanted to use it. I rode it to school and wherever else I wanted to go, so it gave me a lot of freedom. I have very fond memories of it.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with a specific and logical reason. Correct the grammar in “an elderly people” and “wear the bike”: use “elderly people” and “ride bikes.” Avoid saying that elderly people generally cannot ride motorcycles or drive cars, as this sounds inaccurate and unclear. You could mention practical reasons such as convenience, low cost, exercise, or environmental benefits, and use a linking word such as “for example.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and older people. They are affordable, convenient, and a good way to exercise. For example, many elderly people ride bicycles to local markets or parks because they are easy to use and do not require fuel. In larger cities, however, motorcycles and cars are still more common for long-distance travel.

× I also ride it to school to everywhere that I want to go.

✓ I also rode it to school and everywhere that I wanted to go.

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense rode is more appropriate than the present-tense form ride. The verb wanted should also be in the past tense to maintain consistent time reference.

× I also ride it to school to everywhere that I want to go.

✓ I also rode it to school and everywhere that I wanted to go.

The preposition to should not be repeated before everywhere. Use and to connect the two destinations: to school and everywhere.

× Having a bike is helping a lot.

✓ Having a bike helped me a lot.

Because you are describing your childhood, the past-tense verb helped is needed. The phrase is helping describes an action happening now, which does not fit the past context.

× I always saw an elderly people usually wear the bike because they didn't usually know how to ride any motorcycle or car.

✓ I often saw elderly people riding bikes because they did not know how to ride motorcycles or drive cars.

People is a plural noun, so it cannot be used with the singular article an. Use elderly people without an. The plural forms motorcycles and cars are suitable when speaking about vehicles in general.

× I always saw an elderly people usually wear the bike because they didn't usually know how to ride any motorcycle or car.

✓ I often saw elderly people riding bikes because they did not know how to ride motorcycles or drive cars.

Do not use the singular article an before the plural noun people. Also, when speaking about vehicles in general, plural nouns such as motorcycles and cars do not need an article.

× I always saw an elderly people usually wear the bike because they didn't usually know how to ride any motorcycle or car.

✓ I often saw elderly people riding bikes because they did not know how to ride motorcycles or drive cars.

After the verb saw, use the present participle form riding to describe an action that you observed happening. The structure is saw someone doing something.