Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer in the past tense because the question refers to your childhood. Avoid repeating “when I was a child,” and use natural expressions such as “I was very attached to it” instead of “it was very attracted to me.” Give a clear answer first, followed by one specific detail about the bike or how you used it.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I was very attached to it because my parents gave it to me for my tenth birthday. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

Sugestão: Use the correct plural and possessive forms: “bikes are popular in my country” and “bike companies.” Avoid unclear words such as “buys” and “pipes,” unnecessary fillers, and the awkward phrase “fashionably being used.” Support your opinion with specific reasons, such as affordability, convenience, or popularity among young people, and connect your ideas with linking words like “because” or “also.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys. In addition, motorcycle brands such as Bullet are fashionable among young adults.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about a past situation, so the past-tense verb had is needed instead of the present-tense form do have.

× When I was a child. I when I was a child

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

The original response contains incomplete and repeated clauses. The corrected sentence includes the subject I and the verb had, forming a complete sentence.

× That bike was very attracted to me.

✓ That bike was very attractive to me.

Attracted describes a person's feeling toward something, while attractive describes something that causes interest or admiration. Therefore, attractive is the appropriate adjective for the bike.

× I absolutely think that bikes are popular in a country.

✓ I absolutely think that bikes are popular in my country.

The phrase a country refers to one unspecified country. Since the student is referring to their own country, my country is the correct expression.

× There are so many companies of buys like Bullet.

✓ There are so many bike companies, such as Bullet.

Buys is not the plural noun needed here. The noun bike correctly identifies the type of companies being discussed, and companies remains plural because it follows there are and so many.

× Now these pipes are being fashionably being used by the people.

✓ These bikes are now being used by people.

The original sentence repeats being, which makes the passive construction incorrect. The correct present passive form is are being used. Bikes and people are also the appropriate words in this context.

× These bikes are being fashionably used by the people.

✓ These bikes are now being used by people.

Fashionably is unnecessary and does not express the intended meaning clearly. To express the current situation, the time adverb now is placed after the subject and before the passive verb phrase.