Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ трудно понять из-за ошибок в грамматике и произношении/формулировке. Начните с прямого ответа: “No, I didn’t own a bike.” Затем добавьте уточнение о велосипеде брата. Используйте правильные формы: “own a bike” вместо “own bike” и “my brother’s bicycle” вместо “owner brothers bicycle”. Ответ можно расширить до двух предложений, чтобы он был более естественным и информативным.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t own a bike when I was a child, but I often rode my brother’s bicycle. It was a little too big for me, so I had to be careful.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит хорошую попытку объяснить мнение, но начало и связки противоречат друг другу: сначала вы говорите, что велосипеды непопулярны, а затем упоминаете, что почти все дети на них ездят. Сформулируйте ясную позицию и используйте логичные связующие слова, например “Although” или “However”. Исправьте грамматику: “cars and buses” без артикля перед множественным числом и “most children ride bicycles” вместо “almost children ride on bicycles”. Добавьте конкретную причину, например загруженность дорог или использование велосипедов детьми для развлечения.

Exemplo: Bikes are fairly popular among children in my country, although cars and buses are the main forms of transport for adults. Many children ride bicycles for fun, but people usually avoid cycling to work because the roads are busy and there are few cycle lanes.

× I haven't got to own bike bike but I Rd. owner brothers bicycle.

✓ I didn't own a bike, but my brother owned a bicycle.

The question asks about a past period, childhood, so the past simple is needed: did not own and owned. Use did not + base verb, not haven't got to own.

× I haven't got to own bike bike but I Rd. owner brothers bicycle.

✓ I didn't own a bike, but my brother owned a bicycle.

The singular countable noun bike needs the indefinite article a. A bicycle also needs a because it is a singular countable noun mentioned generally.

× I haven't got to own bike bike but I Rd. owner brothers bicycle.

✓ I didn't own a bike, but my brother owned a bicycle.

Brother is singular because the sentence refers to one brother. Do not use the plural form brothers in this context.

× Now I don't because in my opinion But in my country the most popular transport is cars and the buses and the however, almost children ride on bicycles.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the most popular means of transport are cars and buses. However, almost all children ride bicycles.

Use the present simple to describe current popularity and general facts: I don't think, are, and ride. Keep the verb tense consistent when discussing the present.

× Now I don't because in my opinion But in my country the most popular transport is cars and the buses and the however, almost children ride on bicycles.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the most popular means of transport are cars and buses. However, almost all children ride bicycles.

The original sentence uses but, and, and however incorrectly and repeatedly. Use because to give a reason and However to introduce a contrasting idea in a new sentence.

× Now I don't because in my opinion But in my country the most popular transport is cars and the buses and the however, almost children ride on bicycles.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the most popular means of transport are cars and buses. However, almost all children ride bicycles.

Almost cannot directly modify children in this meaning. Use almost all children to mean nearly every child.

× Now I don't because in my opinion But in my country the most popular transport is cars and the buses and the however, almost children ride on bicycles.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the most popular means of transport are cars and buses. However, almost all children ride bicycles.

When speaking about cars and buses in general, do not use the definite article the. Say cars and buses, not the cars and the buses.

× Now I don't because in my opinion But in my country the most popular transport is cars and the buses and the however, almost children ride on bicycles.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the most popular means of transport are cars and buses. However, almost all children ride bicycles.

The plural subject means of transport takes the plural verb are. The phrase are cars and buses agrees correctly with the plural subject.

× Now I don't because in my opinion But in my country the most popular transport is cars and the buses and the however, almost children ride on bicycles.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because the most popular means of transport are cars and buses. However, almost all children ride bicycles.

The original answer contains incomplete clauses, repeated conjunctions, and incorrect punctuation. Organize the response into two complete sentences: one giving your opinion and reason, and one presenting the contrast.