Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor; ancak geçmişten bahsettiğiniz için “I didn’t have” kullanmalısınız. “I don’t have” şimdiki zamanı ifade eder. Ayrıca “we are a lot of brothers and sisters” ve “For this I don’t have a” ifadeleri doğal değildir ve cevap tamamlanmamıştır. Nedeninizi daha doğal biçimde “because my family was quite large and my father couldn’t afford to buy one for each child” şeklinde açıklayabilirsiniz. Cevabı iki veya üç bağlantılı cümleyle tamamlayın ve “however”, “so” veya “as a result” gibi bağlaçlar kullanın.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I have two brothers and three sisters, so my family was quite large. My father couldn’t afford to buy a bicycle for each of us, so I never learned to ride one.

Sugestão: Ana fikriniz anlaşılır; ancak “bikes” çoğul olduğu için “they are popular” demelisiniz. Geçmişteki arkadaşlarınızdan değil, genel durumdan bahsederken “Many people ride bicycles” gibi geniş zaman kullanın. “They riding” yerine “they ride” veya “they enjoy riding them” kullanılmalı; “in in the day” ifadesi doğal değildir. Cevabınızı belirli bir kullanım alanı veya neden ile destekleyin; örneğin bisikletlerin ulaşım, egzersiz veya eğlence için kullanıldığını söyleyebilirsiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people ride them for exercise and entertainment, while others use them as a cheap way to travel. For example, I often see people cycling in parks and around my neighborhood.

× No, I don't have a bike because I have two brothers and three sisters.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because I had two brothers and three sisters.

The question asks about the past, so the answer should use the past tense. Use did not have and had instead of do not have and have.

× We are a lot of brothers and sisters in one family.

✓ There were a lot of brothers and sisters in our family.

To say that people existed in a particular place or group, use the there + be structure. Because the situation is in the past, use there were.

× My father doesn't have money for each one.

✓ My father didn't have enough money for each of us.

The answer refers to the speaker’s childhood, so the past tense didn't have is required. The expression enough money is also needed to show that the money was insufficient.

× For this I don't have a

✓ That is why I didn't have a bike.

The original sentence is incomplete because it ends with the article a and has no following noun. Use a complete sentence such as That is why I didn't have a bike.

× Yes, I think it's popular in my country because my friends had a bicycle.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular in my country because my friends had bicycles.

Bikes is plural, so use the plural pronoun they rather than the singular pronoun it. Since friends refers to more than one person, bicycles is the appropriate plural noun.

× They riding in in the day.

✓ They are riding during the day.

The present continuous requires the auxiliary verb are before the present participle riding. The repeated preposition in in should also be replaced with the natural expression during the day.

× They love it.

✓ They love them.

The pronoun refers to bicycles, which is plural, so use them instead of the singular pronoun it.