Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答基本切题，也有具体经历和原因，但存在表达不自然和语法问题。开头应说“Yes, I did”，而不是“Yes, I had”。“go to the school”在这里应简化为“go to school”；“instead of helping my parents”意思不合适，应该表达“without relying on my parents”。建议使用“because”和“so”连接信息，并将答案控制在2—3句，使表达更自然有效。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I often rode my bike to school because it was convenient and allowed me to travel independently without relying on my parents.

Sugestão: 回答表达了“不太流行”的观点，但开头“Maybe not out”不自然，应改为“Not really”或“Probably not”。“traffic transportation”不是自然搭配，可以说“other forms of transport”；“it need”和“it cost”应改为“they require”和“they take”。此外，电动自行车也属于自行车相关交通工具，论证略显矛盾。建议明确比较普通自行车与汽车、公共交通，并补充一个具体原因。

Exemplo: Not really. Although some people still ride bicycles, cars, buses, and electric bikes are more common in my country because they are faster and more convenient, especially for long-distance travel.

× Maybe not out because you may know that there are a lot of traffic transportation like E bikes or some cars.

✓ Maybe not, because, as you may know, there are many forms of transportation, such as e-bikes and cars.

“There are”后面通常接复数名词。原句中的“traffic transportation”搭配不自然，而且“transportation”通常是不可数名词。这里改为可数的复数名词“many forms of transportation”，因此使用“there are”。同时，“such as”比“like”更适合用于举例。

× Bikes are difficult to ride because it need people more energy and it cost a lot of time.

✓ Bikes are difficult to ride because they require people to use more energy and take a lot of time.

“Bikes”是复数名词，所以后面不能使用单数代词“it”，应改为复数代词“they”。改写后，“they”指代“bikes”，前后一致。

× Bikes are difficult to ride because it need people more energy and it cost a lot of time.

✓ Bikes are difficult to ride because they require people to use more energy and take a lot of time.

主语“Bikes”是复数，因此谓语动词不能使用单数形式。原句中的“it need”和“it cost”结构不正确；改为“they require”和“take”后，主语和谓语保持一致。另外，“need people more energy”缺少正确的动词结构，应该说“require people to use more energy”。