Bike— Part 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

Did you have your bike when you were a child?

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Can you repeat again?

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.0Fluência e coerência: 5.0Pronúncia: 5.0Gramática: 5.0Recurso lexical: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 15.0

Sugestão: Soruyu cevaplamak yerine aynı soruyu tekrar etmişsiniz. Öncelikle doğrudan “Yes” veya “No” ile cevap verin; ardından bisikletiniz hakkında bir veya iki ayrıntı ekleyin. Örneğin, bisikleti kimin aldığını, ne sıklıkla kullandığınızı veya nerede sürdüğünüzü belirtebilirsiniz. “When I was a child” gibi doğal bir ifade kullanmaya dikkat edin; “your bike” bu bağlamda gereksizdir.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought me a blue one for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it around our neighbourhood with my friends.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 20.0

Sugestão: Cevap vermek yerine sorunun tekrarlanmasını istemişsiniz. Soruyu anlamadığınızda “Could you repeat the question, please?” demek daha doğal olur; “repeat again” ifadesi gereksiz tekrara neden olur. Ancak soruyu anladıktan sonra doğrudan fikrinizi belirtmeli ve neden veya örnek eklemelisiniz. “Yes, I think…” ile başlayarak bisikletlerin hangi yaş grupları arasında veya hangi amaçlarla popüler olduğunu açıklayabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. Many people use them for exercise and short journeys because they are affordable and environmentally friendly.

Gramática

22: Article errors

× Did you have your bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The examiner asks about having any bike, not a specific bike belonging to the student. The indefinite article a is needed before the singular countable noun bike. Your changes the meaning to a particular bike that belongs to you.

4: Modal verb usage

× Can you repeat again?

✓ Could you repeat that, please?

Could is more appropriate and polite when making a request. The verb repeat already includes the meaning of doing something again, so again is unnecessary. The pronoun that refers to the examiner's previous question.

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