Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Avoid repeating the same idea and use the complete sentence “I didn’t have...” rather than “I don’t have...” Also, add a brief reason or detail to make your answer more developed.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on the busy roads near our home, so I usually walked or took the bus instead.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion and support it with specific, logically connected details. Correct the unclear phrase “They are all over bike in every Rd.” by saying that bikes are common on the roads. Avoid repetition such as “I see bike, I see rider,” and finish with a complete sentence instead of “so.” Use linking words such as “for example” or “also” to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. They are common on the roads because they are affordable and convenient for short journeys. For example, I often see people riding bikes to work, and my brother uses one to travel around our neighborhood.

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use didn't have, not don't have, because the situation happened in the past.

× Don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is missing a subject. In a complete sentence, include the subject I before the verb. The past-tense form didn't have is also needed because the sentence refers to childhood.

× Don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a past time, so use the past tense didn't have rather than the present-tense form don't have.

× They are all over bike in every Rd.

✓ They are all over the roads.

The sentence refers to multiple roads and bicycles in general, so use the plural noun roads. The phrase all over bike is incorrect because bike should not be used as a singular noun in this context.

× They are all over bike in every Rd.

✓ They are all over the roads.

Use the definite article the before roads when referring to the roads in the area generally. The phrase all over bike is also incorrect; the natural expression is all over the roads.

× They are all over bike in every Rd.

✓ They are all over the roads.

The original sentence has an unnatural structure and combines all over with bike incorrectly. The structure all over the roads clearly expresses that bicycles can be seen throughout the roads.

× Whenever I go out I see bike, I see rider and also my brother has a bike so.

✓ Whenever I go out, I see bikes and riders, and my brother also has a bike.

When speaking about bicycles and riders in general, use the plural forms bikes and riders. Singular countable nouns need an article, such as a bike and a rider, if only one is meant.

× Whenever I go out I see bike, I see rider and also my brother has a bike so.

✓ Whenever I go out, I see bikes and riders, and my brother also has a bike.

The word so is unnecessary at the end of the sentence and does not connect the ideas correctly. Use and to join the two related ideas.

× Whenever I go out I see bike, I see rider and also my brother has a bike so.

✓ Whenever I go out, I see bikes and riders, and my brother also has a bike.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined with commas and ends with an incomplete use of so. Use commas and the conjunction and to connect the clauses clearly and form a complete sentence.