Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and includes specific details, such as the color of the bike, when you rode it, and whom you rode with. However, use “become very good at riding a bike” instead of “become very good in riding cycles.” The phrase “competitions of widening my cycle” is unclear; say “cycling competitions” or “bike races.” Avoid repeating “used to” and finish with a clear result or feeling. A more natural structure would be: direct answer, supporting details, and a concluding comment.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends in the evenings, so I became quite good at cycling. Later, I took part in several cycling competitions, which was exciting and helped me become more confident.

Sugestão: You answer the question directly and make a useful comparison between younger and older people. However, correct the grammar and avoid repetition: say “among younger and older generations,” “The younger generation likes riding bicycles to work and school,” and “the older generation sees cycling as good exercise.” Use present tense because you are describing the current situation. Add a specific reason or example, such as cycling being affordable, environmentally friendly, or convenient in cities.

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country among both younger and older generations. Many young people ride them to work or school because cycling is affordable and environmentally friendly. Older people often cycle for exercise, especially in parks and quiet residential areas.

× I used to ride this bike a lot with my friends in the evenings and become very good in riding cycles.

✓ I used to ride this bike a lot with my friends in the evenings and became very good at riding bicycles.

The correct preposition after good when describing an activity is at, not in. We say good at riding bicycles. Became is also used to keep the sentence consistently in the past.

× Later I started participating in different competitions of widening my cycle and I enjoyed it.

✓ Later, I started participating in different cycling competitions, and I enjoyed them.

The expression competitions of widening my cycle is not grammatically or logically appropriate. Cycling is the correct -ing form to describe the sport or activity. The plural pronoun them refers to competitions.

× Yes, bicycles in my country are really popular among a young and old generation.

✓ Yes, bicycles in my country are really popular among the younger and older generations.

The sentence refers to two groups of people, so generation should be plural: generations. The adjectives should also be in the comparative form, younger and older, when contrasting two groups.

× Yes, bicycles in my country are really popular among a young and old generation.

✓ Yes, bicycles in my country are really popular among the younger and older generations.

A cannot be used with the combined phrase a young and old generation. When referring to specific age groups in a general population, use the definite article the: the younger and older generations.

× Young generation loved to take bicycle to love to take bicycle to their work and schools while older generations think that it is a good exercise.

✓ The younger generation loves to take bicycles to work and school, while the older generation thinks that cycling is good exercise.

The question asks about a general present-day situation, so use the present tense loves and thinks rather than the past-tense form loved. The repeated phrase to love to take bicycle should be removed.

× Young generation loved to take bicycle to love to take bicycle to their work and schools while older generations think that it is a good exercise.

✓ The younger generation loves to take bicycles to work and school, while the older generation thinks that cycling is good exercise.

Generation is a specific group in this context, so it needs the definite article the: the younger generation and the older generation. We normally say go or take something to work and school without possessive or unnecessary articles.

× Young generation loved to take bicycle to love to take bicycle to their work and schools while older generations think that it is a good exercise.

✓ The younger generation loves to take bicycles to work and school, while the older generation thinks that cycling is good exercise.

Generation is a singular collective noun in this sentence, so it takes singular verbs: loves and thinks. The subjects and verbs must agree in number.