Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating or confusing words. The phrase “when I was eating” is unclear, and “a bite” should be “a bike.” Use a simple topic sentence first, then add one or two specific details, such as who bought the bike, when you received it, and how you used it. Keep the answer to two or three coherent sentences and use linking words such as “because” or “so.”

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bike when I was about seven years old, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. I used it to visit my friends and get some exercise.

Sugestão: Give a clear answer first, then explain why bikes are popular. Avoid repeating “really,” “so,” and “used to,” and correct the grammar in “we were usually used to bikes used to ride.” Use the present tense for the current situation and provide specific examples, such as riding to work or school. Finish the sentence clearly instead of leaving the idea incomplete.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many people ride them to school, work, or nearby shops because they are affordable and convenient. However, motorcycles and cars are becoming more common in larger cities.

× Yes, I did what I was when I was eating, I had a bite which was brought by my father as a family presence, people.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had a bike that my father bought for me as a family present.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined incorrectly, making it difficult to understand. Use separate complete sentences and place the time clause, when I was a child, before the main clause. The phrase which was brought by my father is also unnecessarily complicated; bought by my father is clearer here.

× I really, I really love cycling, so when I walk.

✓ I really loved cycling, so I rode my bike whenever I went somewhere.

The question asks about the student’s childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Loved and rode correctly describe past habits. The original sentence also ends with an incomplete clause.

× I really, I really love cycling, so when I walk.

✓ I really loved cycling, so I rode my bike whenever I went somewhere.

The clause beginning with so when is incomplete because it does not express a complete idea. Add a main verb and complete the time clause, as in I rode my bike whenever I went somewhere.

× We are we were usually used to bikes used to ride a bike to commute joys and school.

✓ People in my area usually ride bikes to commute to work and school.

The question asks about the present popularity of bikes, so use the present simple, usually ride. The original sequence combines several forms incorrectly: are, were, used to, and used to ride. Use one clear present-tense verb phrase.

× We are we were usually used to bikes used to ride a bike to commute joys and school.

✓ People in my area usually ride bikes to commute to work and school.

The correct preposition after commute is to when stating the destination or purpose, as in commute to work and school. The original wording does not use this preposition correctly.

× Yes, absolutely because I live in a rural area so we are we were usually used to bikes used to ride a bike to commute joys and school.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I live in a rural area, and people there usually ride bikes to commute to work and school.

The original sentence contains repeated and conflicting verb phrases and joins multiple ideas without proper structure. Separate the response into clear sentences and use and to connect the two related ideas.

× So I think it is really it is really very popular in my country because it's really

✓ So, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The pronoun it is unclear because the answer is discussing bikes in general. Use the plural noun bikes and the plural verb are to make the reference clear. The original sentence also repeats it is and ends without a complete idea.

× So I think it is really it is really very popular in my country because it's really

✓ So, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The final because clause is incomplete and does not provide a complete reason. Remove the unfinished clause or complete it with a suitable subject and verb. The corrected sentence gives a complete answer.