Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có ý chính phù hợp nhưng nhiều từ bị nhận diện hoặc phát âm sai, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ, chẳng hạn “buy” nên là “bike”, “belong to my sister” cần dùng ở thì quá khứ, và “when she got older, it was passed on to me” sẽ diễn đạt chính xác hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó thêm một chi tiết giải thích về nguồn gốc chiếc xe. Vì đang kể về thời thơ ấu, hãy sử dụng thì quá khứ nhất quán và tránh các từ đệm như “uh”.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. It originally belonged to my older sister, and she gave it to me when she outgrew it. I was really excited to have my own bike because I could ride it around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời có quan điểm rõ ràng và có cố gắng đưa ra lý do, nhưng phần diễn đạt còn khó hiểu do lặp từ và dùng sai từ, chẳng hạn “when I wear trial” và “health bike”. Hãy dùng danh từ số nhiều “bikes are” thay vì “it’s”, đồng thời thay các từ không phù hợp bằng cách diễn đạt cụ thể như “many children in my neighborhood own a bike”. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc: quan điểm → lý do → ví dụ hoặc kết quả, và cần tránh lặp “every” cũng như các từ đệm không cần thiết.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys, so many families buy one for their children. In my neighborhood, I often see kids riding their bikes after school.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past period, so the past-tense form had is needed instead of the present-tense form have. Use the past tense when describing possession during childhood.

× The bike belong to my sister, and then as I get older, it came to me.

✓ The bike belonged to my sister, and then, as I got older, it came to me.

The events happened in the past, so belong must change to belonged and get must change to got. Keep the verb tense consistent when telling a story about the past.

× The bike belonged to my sister, and then, as I got older, it came to me.

✓ The bike belonged to my sister, and then, as I got older, it was given to me.

The original expression to me is unclear. The passive structure was given to me clearly shows that someone gave the bike to the speaker. Use a complete clause with a clear subject and verb when explaining how something changed ownership.

× Yes, it's really popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country.

The noun bikes is plural, so the singular pronoun it is not appropriate. Repeat the plural noun or use they are. Also, because the question is about bikes in general, bikes is clearer than it.

× Every child around me also have a bike.

✓ Every child around me also had a bike.

The subject every child is grammatically singular, so it requires a singular verb. In this past-time context, use had rather than have. Remember that every + singular noun takes a singular verb.

× When I was a child, every child around me also have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, every child around me also had a bike.

The phrase when I was a child refers to the past, so have must be changed to had. Use past tense consistently for situations that existed during your childhood.