Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly, then give one or two specific details. Use the past tense consistently: “helped me be more productive,” not “helps me more productive.” Avoid repeating words such as “and,” and complete your final idea instead of stopping abruptly. You could explain how you lost the bike or mention where you usually rode it. Use linking words such as “because,” “however,” or “eventually” to make the answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a mountain bike when I was a child. I used to ride it almost every day to run small errands and visit my friends, which helped me become more independent. Unfortunately, I eventually lost it when my family moved to a new house.

Sugestão: Use the plural subject “bikes” with “they are,” and say “there are many cyclists,” rather than “there’s a lot of cyclists.” Keep the tense consistent: use “when I ride my motorcycle” for a general situation, not “when I drove.” Also, “productive” does not naturally describe seeing cyclists; “convenient,” “healthy,” or “environmentally friendly” would be more appropriate. Support your opinion with a clear reason and a specific example from your hometown.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in my hometown. There are many cyclists on the roads, particularly in the early morning and at weekends. I think cycling is popular because it is affordable, healthy, and environmentally friendly. I often see them while riding my motorcycle, and I hope to buy a bicycle myself one day.

× I used it every day for my errands which helps me more productive.

✓ I used it every day for my errands, which helped me be more productive.

The answer is about the past, so helps should be changed to the past-tense form helped. The phrase help me more productive is grammatically incomplete because productive is an adjective; it needs the verb be: helped me be more productive.

× and and somehow it I just I lost it eventually maybe like

✓ Somehow, I eventually lost it.

The original phrase contains repeated conjunctions and pronouns and does not form a clear, complete sentence. Use one subject, one verb, and a logical word order: I eventually lost it.

× Yes, it is so popular in our country, especially in my hometown.

✓ Yes, they are very popular in our country, especially in my hometown.

The noun bikes is plural, so it cannot be used as its pronoun. Use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are. They refers to bikes.

× There's a lot of cyclists everywhere when I drove my motorcycle.

✓ There are a lot of cyclists everywhere when I drive my motorcycle.

The noun cyclists is plural, so the there-be structure requires are rather than is. The phrase is also describing a general present situation, so drive is more appropriate than the past-tense drove.

× There's a lot of cyclists everywhere when I drove my motorcycle.

✓ There are a lot of cyclists everywhere when I drive my motorcycle.

The question asks about the present popularity of bikes, and this sentence describes a usual or current observation. Therefore, use the present tense drive instead of the past tense drove.

× I hope someday I get my bicycle because I really like the way I see it.

✓ I hope that someday I will get a bicycle because I really like the way I see it.

The phrase someday refers to a future event, so will get clearly expresses the future. The article a is used before bicycle because the speaker is referring to one nonspecific bicycle.