Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也加入了“父母买自行车”和“大学才学会骑车”的具体经历，内容比较完整。主要问题是语法和用词：应说“when I was five years old”，而不是“when I was like a five years old”；“embarrassed”描述人的感受，应改为“embarrassing”描述事情。另外，“at that time until...”结构不自然，可以直接说“I didn’t learn to ride it until I went to college.” 建议先直接回答，再用转折补充个人经历。

Exemplo: Yes, my parents bought me a bike when I was five years old. However, it’s a little embarrassing that I didn’t learn to ride it until I went to college. I was afraid of falling, so I avoided cycling when I was a child.

Sugestão: 回答表达了明确观点，也提到了便利性，但部分内容不够准确或自然。“It’s not that cold in China”不能充分解释自行车流行的原因，而且中国不同地区气候差异较大；“share the bags”应改为“use bike-sharing services”或“rent shared bikes”；“return it to anywhere”应改为“return it to any designated parking area”或“leave it at another permitted location”。建议围绕共享单车、短途出行和交通便利性展开，并使用“because”“for example”等连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in large cities. This is mainly because bike-sharing services are convenient and affordable for short journeys. For example, people can cycle to a subway station and leave the bike at a designated parking area. As a result, bikes are a practical way to avoid traffic jams.

× My parents bought me a bike when I was like a five years old, but it's a little embarrassed that I didn't learn how to ride a bike at that time until I went to college.

✓ My parents bought me a bike when I was, like, five years old, but it's a little embarrassing that I didn't learn how to ride a bike at that time until I went to college.

表示年龄时应说“five years old”，前面不能使用冠词“a”。如果使用“a”，应改为“a five-year-old child”。

× My parents bought me a bike when I was like a five years old, but it's a little embarrassed that I didn't learn how to ride a bike at that time until I went to college.

✓ My parents bought me a bike when I was, like, five years old, but it's a little embarrassing that I didn't learn how to ride a bike at that time until I went to college.

“embarrassed”通常描述人的感受，表示“感到尴尬的”；这里描述“这件事令人尴尬”，所以应使用“embarrassing”。建议区分：人感到尴尬用“embarrassed”，事情令人尴尬用“embarrassing”。

× Of course. It's not that cold in China. You share the bags, which means you can ride the bike anywhere and return it to anywhere. It's very convenient.

✓ Of course. It's not that cold in China. You share the bikes, which means you can ride a bike anywhere and return it anywhere. It's very convenient.

“anywhere”表示地点副词，前面通常不需要介词“to”，所以应说“return it anywhere”，而不是“return it to anywhere”。

× Of course. It's not that cold in China. You share the bags, which means you can ride the bike anywhere and return it to anywhere. It's very convenient.

✓ Of course. It's not that cold in China. You share the bikes, which means you can ride a bike anywhere and return it anywhere. It's very convenient.

这里是在泛指任何一辆自行车，因此应使用不定冠词“a”： “ride a bike”。“the bike”通常表示双方都知道的某一辆特定自行车。