Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I did.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, many student many student ride back to school.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答直接且语法正确,但内容过于简短,缺少具体细节。可以补充你几岁开始骑车、骑车的用途或对这段经历的感受,使答案更自然、更有内容。
Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight years old. I usually rode it around my neighborhood and sometimes went to school by bike. I really enjoyed the sense of freedom it gave me.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 答案的主要意思基本清楚,但存在明显的语法、重复和用词问题。“many student”应改为“many students”,“ride back to school”表达不准确,可改为“ride their bikes to school”。建议先直接回答,再补充流行的原因或具体场景,例如学生骑车上学、城市有自行车道等。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many students ride their bikes to school because it is convenient and inexpensive. In addition, cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly way to travel.
× Yes, many student many student ride back to school.
✓ Yes, many students ride bikes to school.
“many”后面必须接可数名词的复数形式,因此“student”应改为“students”。原句中“many student”重复了一次,需要删除重复内容。另外,为了准确表达“骑自行车上学”,应使用“ride bikes to school”。