Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, then add one or two specific details. Replace “I age to ride” with “I used to ride” and “most weakened” with “most weekends.” The answer has a good basic structure and relevant details, but accurate word choice and pronunciation are important for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents bought me a mountain bike, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends most weekends. It was a fun way to relax and get some exercise.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion at the beginning and support it with a logical comparison. Several expressions are unclear or incorrectly chosen: use “people preferred bicycles to cars” instead of “had tendencies to supply,” “electricity or fuel-powered vehicles” instead of “the electricities or the fuel ones,” and “the benefits of cycling” instead of “the roles of using spice.” Also, explain how convenience affects people’s transportation choices.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students and people who live in smaller cities. In the past, many people preferred bicycles to cars because they were affordable and practical. However, cars and electric scooters are becoming more common because they are faster and more convenient.

× When I was a child, my parents bought me a mountain bike. I age to ride around the neighborhood with my friends most weakened, and cycling was a fun way to relax and get some exercise.

✓ When I was a child, my parents bought me a mountain bike. I used to ride around the neighborhood with my friends most weekends, and cycling was a fun way to relax and get some exercise.

Used to ride is the correct form for describing a repeated or regular activity in the past. Age cannot be used as the verb in this sentence. Also, weekends should be plural because most is followed by a plural countable noun.

× In the past people had tendencies to supply instead of the electricities or the fuel ones, but nowadays people tend to forget the roles of using spice because of the convenience

✓ In the past, people tended to cycle instead of using electric or fuel-powered vehicles, but nowadays people tend to forget the benefits of using bikes because of their convenience.

The uncountable nouns electricity and fuel do not normally take the plural form or the definite article in this context. The expression fuel ones is also incorrect because ones cannot replace an uncountable noun. The phrase tended to cycle is more grammatically natural for describing a past habit, and their refers clearly to bikes.