Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Yes, in my country has lots of bikes. Until now we still have a sharing bikes in our workway.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答基本直接,但时态错误:谈论过去应使用“had”,而不是“have”。建议补充一个具体细节,例如自行车的颜色、用途或骑车的地点,使答案更完整;可以使用“because”或“especially”连接信息。
Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答表达了明确观点,也提到了共享单车,但存在多处语法和搭配问题。“In my country has”应改为“There are many bikes in my country”;“a sharing bikes”应改为“shared bikes”或“bike-sharing services”;“in our workway”表达不自然,可以说“on the way to work”。建议说明自行车受欢迎的原因,例如方便、环保或适合短途出行。
Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. There are many shared bikes, especially in big cities, because they are convenient and environmentally friendly for short trips.
× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
“when I was a child”表示过去的时间,因此主句也应该使用一般过去时。将“have”改为“had”。建议看到“when I was young/when I was a child”等过去时间表达时,使用过去时。
× Yes, in my country has lots of bikes.
✓ Yes, there are lots of bikes in my country.
原句缺少正确的主语和谓语结构。表示“某地有某物”时,应使用“There is/are + 名词 + 地点”。因为“lots of bikes”是复数,所以使用“there are”。
× Until now we still have a sharing bikes in our workway.
✓ Until now, we still have shared bikes on our walkways.
“a”只能修饰单数可数名词,不能和复数名词“bikes”一起使用。这里应去掉“a”,并使用复数形式“bikes”。“shared bikes”表示“共享单车”;“walkways”表示“人行道”,通常与介词“on”搭配。