Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 時制を過去形に統一してください。具体的には、"I have a bike" は過去の話なので "I had a bike"、"when I was child" は "when I was a child"、"when I turn ten" は "when I turned ten" とします。また、"plot this" はこの文脈では不自然なので、年齢を正確に覚えていない場合は "I think I was about six or eight years old" と言うと自然です。最初に直接答え、その後に自転車に乗れるようになった時期を簡潔に説明すると、より明確で効果的です。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I think I was about seven years old when I got it. At first, I needed help from my parents, but I learned to ride it by myself when I was ten.

Sugestão: 回答の最初に明確な意見を述べた点はよいですが、理由をつなぐ "because" が重複しており、文の意味も不明確です。"people in here" は "people here"、"prefer a car" は一般論として "prefer cars" とし、"Japan is too hot to work and use bicycles" は "Japan is often too hot for people to cycle comfortably" のように言い換えてください。また、質問は自転車全般の人気についてなので、スポーツ自転車に乗った経験よりも、通勤・通学や買い物で使う人が多いかどうかなど、関連する具体例を加えると内容がより適切になります。

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in Japan, especially for short trips. Many people use them to go shopping or take their children to school. However, cars are more convenient for long journeys, and the hot and humid summers can make cycling uncomfortable.

× I have a bike when I was child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past situation, so have must change to the past-tense form had. The phrase when I was a child also requires the article a before child.

× I was child.

✓ I was a child.

A singular countable noun such as child normally requires an article. Use a before child when referring to one child in general.

× Then I'm trying to plot this when I was six years old or eight years old or something.

✓ Then I was trying to plot this when I was six or eight years old or something.

Because this event happened in the past, am trying must be changed to the past progressive form was trying. The phrase six or eight years old is also a more natural way to express an uncertain age.

× When I turn ten years old, I can ride a bike by myself.

✓ When I turned ten years old, I could ride a bike by myself.

The sentence describes a past event, so turn must become turned. The ability also belonged to the past, so can must become could.

× I can ride a bike by myself.

✓ I could ride a bike by myself.

Could is the past form of can when describing an ability that someone had in the past.

× People in here prefer a car.

✓ People here prefer cars.

Use here without the preposition in when referring to people in the current place or country. The plural noun cars is more appropriate when speaking about cars in general.

× People in here prefer a car.

✓ People here prefer cars.

The sentence refers to cars as a general means of transportation, so the plural form cars is more suitable than the singular form a car.

× Japan is too hot to work and use bicycles.

✓ Japan is too hot for people to use bicycles.

The structure too hot to work and use bicycles incorrectly suggests that Japan itself works and uses bicycles. Use too hot for people to use bicycles to make the sentence structure and meaning clear.