Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan yanıt veriyor; ancak “when I were” yerine “when I was” ve “he didn't used to use” yerine “he didn't use” kullanılmalı. “Bike bike” tekrarını ve “uh” gibi dolgu ifadelerini kaldırarak daha akıcı konuşabilirsiniz. Ayrıca “I somehow managed to use” ifadesi tamamlanmamış; “I somehow managed to ride it” şeklinde bitirilmelidir. Cevabı daha doğal ve etkili yapmak için bisikleti nasıl kullandığınızı veya onun sizin için neden önemli olduğunu belirten bir ayrıntı ekleyin.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, although it actually belonged to my older brother. He hardly ever used it, so I started riding it around our neighborhood. It was a little too big for me at first, but I gradually learned to control it.

Sugestão: Ana fikriniz anlaşılır; ancak cümlede “design design” ve “but” tekrarları akıcılığı azaltıyor. “Roads designed for bikes are not quite often” doğal değildir; bunun yerine “there are not many dedicated bike lanes” veya “cycling infrastructure is limited” kullanabilirsiniz. “It’s increased progressively” ifadesinde neyin arttığı açık değil; “the number of people cycling has gradually increased” şeklinde daha net bir yapı kurun. Daha yüksek bir puan için ülkenizdeki bisiklet kullanımına somut bir neden veya örnek ekleyin.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially among young people and university students. However, there are still not many dedicated bike lanes, so cycling can be unsafe in busy cities. Even so, the number of people who commute by bike has gradually increased in recent years.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were, I was a child and it's my brother's bike bike actually, and he didn't uh used to use it properly, but I somehow managed to use.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was actually my brother's bike, and he didn't use it properly, but I somehow managed to use it.

The past form of be used with I is was, not were. Because the whole experience happened in the past, it's must be changed to it was. After the auxiliary did not or didn't, the main verb must be in its base form, so used must become use.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were, I was a child and it's my brother's bike bike actually, and he didn't uh used to use it properly, but I somehow managed to use.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was actually my brother's bike, and he didn't use it properly, but I somehow managed to use it.

The verb use needs an object in this context. The pronoun it refers to the bike, so the sentence should end with use it rather than use alone.

× Yes, I had a bike when I were, I was a child and it's my brother's bike bike actually, and he didn't uh used to use it properly, but I somehow managed to use.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was actually my brother's bike, and he didn't use it properly, but I somehow managed to use it.

The original answer contains a false start and several clauses joined together unclearly. Divide the response into two sentences and remove the repeated words to make the structure clear and grammatical.

× Bikes are quite popular in my country but roads for that design design for the bikes are not quite often but it's like increased progressively.

✓ Bikes are quite popular in my country, but roads designed for bikes are not very common. However, the number of these roads is increasing progressively.

Designed is the past participle used in the reduced relative clause roads designed for bikes. It describes roads that have been designed for bicycles. The original phrase design design is not grammatically formed.

× Bikes are quite popular in my country but roads for that design design for the bikes are not quite often but it's like increased progressively.

✓ Bikes are quite popular in my country, but roads designed for bikes are not very common. However, the number of these roads is increasing progressively.

Often is an adverb and cannot describe the frequency or availability of roads in this sentence. Common is the appropriate adjective because it describes whether these roads are widespread or easy to find.

× Bikes are quite popular in my country but roads for that design design for the bikes are not quite often but it's like increased progressively.

✓ Bikes are quite popular in my country, but roads designed for bikes are not very common. However, the number of these roads is increasing progressively.

The phrase it's like increased is not a correct present-tense structure. Use is increasing to describe a change that is happening now. Also, the subject should be the number of these roads, because the number is what is increasing.