Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly by saying that you had a bike, not a bag. Use accurate vocabulary and grammar: “birthday present” instead of “bursting private,” “used” instead of “use,” and “ride it” rather than “use it to ride it.” Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details about when and where you rode. For example, use “I used to ride it” to describe a past habit.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me as a birthday present, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon. I often rode with my friends, so it was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

Sugestão: Begin with a complete topic sentence, such as “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.” Use natural expressions like “are paying more attention to their health” instead of “are more concentrating on their health,” and “use bikes for exercise” instead of “use back as an exercise.” Add one specific supporting detail, such as people cycling in parks or using shared bikes. Link your ideas with “because,” “so,” or “as a result.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially since the pandemic. People are paying more attention to their health, so many of them use bikes for exercise and commuting. In large cities, it is also common to see people riding shared bikes in parks and around residential areas.

× Yes, I had a bag when I was a child and I got it from my parents as a bursting private and I use it to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood with my friends.

✓ Yes, I had a bag when I was a child and I got it from my parents as a bursting private and I used it to ride it every afternoon around my neighborhood with my friends.

The question asks about a past situation, and the other verbs are in the past tense. Therefore, use used instead of use to maintain consistent past-tense narration. Note that bag and bursting private appear to be word-choice or transcription problems rather than errors covered by the specified grammar categories.

× Yes, very popular, especially after the pandemic.

✓ Yes, they are very popular, especially after the pandemic.

The original response is missing a verb and a clear subject. Add they as the subject and are as the linking verb to form a complete sentence. They refers to bikes.