Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly answers the question, but it is too brief to demonstrate your speaking ability. Add one or two supporting details, such as when you used the bike, where you rode it, or how you felt about it. Use a linking word such as “because” or “especially” to make the response more developed.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school. I really enjoyed it because it gave me a sense of freedom.

Sugestão: You express a clear opinion and provide reasons, but there are several grammar and coherence problems. Use the plural noun “bikes” with “they,” change “use it” to “use them,” and avoid repetition such as “also the kids do, they also used it.” Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples, such as commuting and children’s recreation. Also, use the present tense consistently because you are describing a current situation.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many adults use them to commute to work or travel short distances, especially in crowded cities. Children also ride bikes for fun, and some people choose them because they are affordable and environmentally friendly.

× Of course, because some people use it in their daily lives when they're going to work or somewhere else and also the kids do, they also used it.

✓ Of course, because some people use bikes in their daily lives when they go to work or somewhere else, and children also use them.

Bikes is plural, so the pronouns it and them must be used consistently. Use them to refer to bikes. Repeating the noun bikes also makes the reference clearer.

× Of course, because some people use it in their daily lives when they're going to work or somewhere else and also the kids do, they also used it.

✓ Of course, because some people use bikes in their daily lives when they go to work or somewhere else, and children also use them.

The question asks about a general situation in the present, so use the present-tense verb use instead of the past-tense verb used. For habits and regular activities, use the simple present tense.