Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly, then add one specific detail about the bicycle or how you used it. Correct the article and remove the unnecessary repetition in “bought me for me.” Say “the bicycle my parents bought for me” or “the bicycle my parents gave me.”

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small blue bike that my parents bought for me. I really enjoyed riding it around my neighborhood after school.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason and support it with a specific example. Use the plural “bikes” or “bicycles” when speaking generally, and replace the unclear phrase “It hurts me, relapst” with an accurate expression such as “They help people relax and clear their minds.” Also, avoid repeating “I can see” and “riding a bicycle.”

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people and commuters. Many people ride them to work or exercise because bikes are convenient and inexpensive. They also help people relax and clear their minds.

× I really enjoyed riding bicycle my parents bought me for me.

✓ I really enjoyed riding the bicycle my parents bought for me.

The singular countable noun bicycle needs the definite article the because it refers to a specific bicycle. The phrase bought me for me is also unnecessarily repeated; bought the bicycle for me is the correct structure.

× I really enjoyed riding bicycle my parents bought me for me.

✓ I really enjoyed riding the bicycle my parents bought for me.

The original sentence combines the indirect object me with the phrase for me, creating an incorrect and awkward sentence structure. Use either bought me the bicycle or bought the bicycle for me. Because bicycle follows riding directly, the second structure is more natural here.

× It hurts me, relapst and clear their minds.

✓ It helps people relax and clear their minds.

The pronoun their should refer to a clear plural noun. Adding people provides the correct plural antecedent. Also, when discussing the benefits of cycling, the natural pronoun structure is people ... their minds.

× It hurts me, relapst and clear their minds.

✓ It helps people relax and clear their minds.

The original sentence does not form a clear grammatical structure because the verbs are not properly connected to a subject and helping verb. After helps, use the base forms relax and clear in a parallel structure: helps people relax and clear their minds.