Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 직접 답하려고 한 점은 좋지만, 반복적인 머뭇거림(“uh”, “I”)이 많아 자연스럽지 않습니다. “I wanted to bought”는 “I wanted to buy” 또는 과거 사실이라면 “I wanted a bike”로 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 “I talked about my father’s and”는 문장이 완성되지 않았으므로, 아버지에게 자전거를 사 달라고 부탁했다는 내용을 완전한 문장으로 표현하세요. 2~3개의 문장으로 답하고, “because”와 “so”를 사용해 이유와 결과를 명확하게 연결하는 것이 좋습니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I really liked riding bikes, so I asked my father to buy me one. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Sugestão: “Yes”라고 직접 답하고 한국의 자전거 이용에 대해 설명한 점은 좋습니다. 그러나 “very far part very popular”와 “bike load”는 부자연스러우므로 “quite popular”와 “bike lanes”로 수정해야 합니다. “many people likes ride”는 “many people like riding” 또는 “many people like to ride”가 올바른 표현입니다. 자전거 도로가 많다는 점뿐 아니라 사람들이 운동이나 출퇴근을 위해 자전거를 탄다는 구체적인 이유를 추가하고, 불완전한 마지막 문장인 “So I think it is”는 삭제하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Korea, especially in large cities. There are many bike lanes along rivers and in public parks, so people can ride safely. Many Koreans use bicycles for exercise or short trips, particularly on weekends.

× When I was young, I had a bike because I like bikes.

✓ When I was young, I had a bike because I liked bikes.

The question asks about the past, so the verb like should be changed to its past-tense form, liked.

× I had a bike because I like bike.

✓ I had a bike because I liked bikes.

When speaking about bicycles in general, use the plural count noun bikes rather than the singular noun bike without an article.

× I wanted to bought bikes.

✓ I wanted to buy bikes.

After the structure wanted to, use the base form of the verb, buy, not the past-tense form bought.

× I talked about my father's and.

✓ I talked to my father.

Use talk to someone when describing a conversation with a person. The phrase my father's is also incomplete because it requires a noun after the possessive form.

× Bikes are very far part very popular.

✓ Bikes are very popular.

Far part does not function correctly in this sentence. Use the adverb very directly before the adjective popular.

× There are many bike load.

✓ There are many bike lanes.

The quantifier many must be followed by a plural count noun. Use lanes, not the singular or incorrect form load.

× Many people likes to ride a bicycle.

✓ Many people like to ride a bicycle.

People is a plural subject, so it must be followed by the plural verb form like, not likes.

× Many people like ride a bicycle.

✓ Many people like riding bicycles.

After like, the gerund form riding is appropriate. The plural form bicycles is also natural when discussing bicycles in general.

× So I think it is.

✓ So I think they are popular.

The pronoun it refers to a singular noun, but bikes is plural. Use they and the plural verb are to refer to bikes.