Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời đi thẳng vào ý chính và có lý do, nhưng có nhiều lỗi phát âm/ dùng từ: “pie” cần sửa thành “bike”, “give a permission” thành “give me permission” hoặc “allow me”, và “he think” thành “he thought”. Bạn cũng lặp lại “because” và có nhiều từ ngập ngừng. Hãy dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn gồm câu trả lời trực tiếp + lý do, đồng thời thêm một chi tiết cụ thể nếu cần để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My father didn’t allow me to have one because he thought it was too dangerous. I usually walked to school or went with my parents instead.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đúng chủ đề và đưa ra lý do, nhưng có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp: “buys” cần sửa thành “bikes are”, “pie” thành “bikes”, “friend” thành “friends”, và “buy a bike to go to work” nên đổi thành “use bikes to go to work”. Câu “I’m from Vietnam” không cần thiết vì câu hỏi đã đề cập đến quốc gia của bạn. Hãy mở đầu bằng quan điểm rõ ràng, sau đó đưa ra hai chi tiết cụ thể; dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “for example” để liên kết ý.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in Vietnam, especially in smaller towns and cities. Many people use them to commute to work, go shopping, or meet friends because they are affordable and convenient. For short journeys, people often choose bikes instead of cars or motorbikes.

× No, I, I didn't have a pie when I was a child because my family, uh, especially my father doesn't give a permission for me to have a pie because he think that's too dangerous for me.

✓ No, I—I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family, especially my father, didn't give me permission to have a bike because he thought it was too dangerous for me.

The question asks about the student's childhood, so the past tense is needed throughout the explanation. Doesn't should be changed to didn't, and that's should be changed to it was. Use the past-tense form thought instead of think.

× No, I, I didn't have a pie when I was a child because my family, uh, especially my father doesn't give a permission for me to have a pie because he think that's too dangerous for me.

✓ No, I—I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family, especially my father, didn't give me permission to have a bike because he thought it was too dangerous for me.

The subject he is third-person singular. In the present tense, the verb would be thinks. However, because the event happened in the past, the correct form is thought.

× No, I, I didn't have a pie when I was a child because my family, uh, especially my father doesn't give a permission for me to have a pie because he think that's too dangerous for me.

✓ No, I—I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family, especially my father, didn't give me permission to have a bike because he thought it was too dangerous for me.

Permission is an uncountable noun in this expression, so it is not used with the article a. Say give me permission, not give a permission. The phrase permission to have a bike is also the natural structure.

× Yes, I'm from Vietnam and in my country buys a very popular.

✓ Yes, I'm from Vietnam, and in my country, bikes are very popular.

When talking about bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes. The plural subject requires the plural verb are. Also, the word very should come before the adjective popular.

× Yes, I'm from Vietnam and in my country buys a very popular.

✓ Yes, I'm from Vietnam, and in my country, bikes are very popular.

The original sentence has no clear subject for buys. The subject should be bikes, and bikes agrees with the plural verb are. A complete structure is bikes are very popular.

× Most people here buy pie to go to work or to hang out with friend and we usually use pie instead of a car.

✓ Most people here buy bikes to go to work or to hang out with friends, and we usually use bikes instead of cars.

Because the sentence refers to people and bikes in general, use the plural forms friends, bikes, and cars. The phrase with friends is the natural plural expression when referring to social activities with other people.