Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời trực tiếp và có thêm chi tiết cá nhân phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, cần tránh nối hai mệnh đề bằng dấu phẩy; hãy dùng “and” hoặc tách thành hai câu. Cụm “it had yellow colour” chưa tự nhiên, nên nói “it was yellow” hoặc “it was bright yellow”.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My dad bought me a bike when I was six years old, and it was bright yellow. I loved riding it around my neighborhood after school.

Sugestão: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đưa ra lý do, nhưng có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp. “buyes” và “buy tool” cần sửa thành “bikes”; “I always see” nên đổi thành “I always saw”; và “my neighborhood use ... riding around the home” nên diễn đạt là “people in my neighborhood used to ride bikes around the area”. Hãy dùng từ nối như “because” và cung cấp một ví dụ cụ thể, đồng thời tránh lặp lại từ “popular”.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short journeys. When I was a child, I often saw people in my neighborhood riding bikes to school, work, or nearby shops.

× My dad bought it when I was six years old, it had yellow colour.

✓ My dad bought it when I was six years old. It had a yellow colour.

The original sentence contains a comma splice: two independent clauses are incorrectly joined with only a comma. Use a full stop, a semicolon, or a suitable conjunction to connect them correctly.

× My dad bought it when I was six years old, it had yellow colour.

✓ My dad bought it when I was six years old. It had a yellow colour.

The singular countable noun colour needs the indefinite article a. Use a before a singular countable noun when mentioning it generally or for the first time.

× I think buyes are popular in my country because when I was a child I always see my neighborhood use the buy tool riding around the home.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because, when I was a child, I always saw people in my neighborhood riding them around.

The phrase when I was a child refers to a finished period in the past, so see must be changed to the past-tense form saw. Use the past simple when describing repeated actions during a completed past period.

× I think buyes are popular in my country because when I was a child I always see my neighborhood use the buy tool riding around the home.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because, when I was a child, I always saw people in my neighborhood riding them around.

After saw, use an object followed by the present participle to describe an action that was in progress or happening repeatedly: saw people riding. The structure saw people use is also possible, but saw people riding is more natural here.