Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答开头误用了“bag”，应直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”。注意过去时：用“had, liked, rode”而不是“have”。“ride a bike in the park”比“ride the bike on the park”更自然；同时，“With my cousin, yeah, we loved the moment. We usually.”表达不完整且重复，应该补充一个具体活动或感受，并用“also”连接信息。建议控制在2—4个完整句子内。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it in the park with my brother and cousin. We usually raced each other, so cycling was both fun and a great way to spend time together.

Sugestão: 回答的主要观点是明确的，但“back”应改为“bikes”，“I studying”应改为“I study”或“I am studying”，“shared back”应改为“shared bikes”，“I rather shield back”应改为“I’d rather ride a shared bike”。建议先直接回答“Yes, they are”，再说明广州共享单车很多以及自己的使用情况；使用“because”或“for example”连接原因和例子，并避免重复表达。

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in large cities. I’m studying at a university in Guangzhou, where shared bikes are everywhere. For example, I often ride one to class or to a restaurant because it is convenient and helps me avoid traffic.

× Of course I have a bag.

✓ Of course, I had a bike.

问题发生在过去的童年时期，所以应该使用过去时态。将“have”改为“had”。另外，“bike”符合题目语境；“bag”应为用词错误。

× When I was a child, I liked to ride the bike on the park with my brother.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to ride a bike in the park with my brother.

表示在公园里使用“in the park”，不能使用“on the park”。“in”表示在某个区域内部。

× When I was a child, I liked to ride the bike on the park with my brother.

✓ When I was a child, I liked to ride a bike in the park with my brother.

“bike”在这里是第一次提到的单数可数名词，前面通常使用不定冠词“a”，所以应说“a bike”，而不是“the bike”。

× We usually.

✓ We usually rode our bikes together.

原句只有主语“We”和副词“usually”，缺少谓语动词，因此不是完整句子。因为谈论的是童年经历，所以使用过去式“rode”。

× Back is very popular in our country.

✓ Bikes are very popular in our country.

句子的主语是“bikes”，表示一类交通工具，因此要使用复数形式。复数主语后面的动词也要使用“are”。

× Back is very popular in our country.

✓ Bikes are very popular in our country.

主语“bikes”是复数，所以系动词必须使用复数形式“are”，不能使用单数形式“is”。

× I studying in the university in Guangzhou.

✓ I am studying at a university in Guangzhou.

现在进行时的结构是“主语 + am/is/are + 动词-ing”。原句缺少“am”。此外，“at a university”是更自然的搭配，“a university”表示第一次提到的一所大学。

× There is a lot of shared back.

✓ There are a lot of shared bikes.

“a lot of shared bikes”中的“bikes”是复数，所以“There be”结构应使用“There are”，不能使用“There is”。

× There is a lot of shared back.

✓ There are a lot of shared bikes.

“a lot of”后面是可数名词“bikes”，表示很多辆共享单车，因此名词应使用复数形式“bikes”。

× I rather shield back every day to take classes and go to dinner.

✓ I would rather ride a shared bike every day to attend classes and go out to dinner.

表达“宁愿做某事”时，应使用固定结构“would rather + 动词原形”。因此“I rather”应改为“I would rather”，后面使用“ride”。