Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Répondez directement à la question dès le début : « Yes, I did. » Utilisez le passé correctement : « played » au lieu de « play », « bought » au lieu de « buy » et « was » au lieu de « were ». Évitez les hésitations répétées (« uh ») et les phrases incomplètes. Ajoutez des détails précis, par exemple la couleur du vélo et la manière dont vous l’utilisiez, en reliant les idées avec « because », « and » ou « so ».

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My father bought me a red bicycle for my eleventh birthday. I was very excited because it had new gears, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

Sugestão: Commencez par une réponse claire : « Yes, bikes have become quite popular in my country. » Évitez la répétition de « in a few years in the last few years » et remplacez « it’s a new culture in our mind » par une expression naturelle comme « cycling has recently become more popular ». Expliquez pourquoi cette popularité augmente, par exemple grâce aux pistes cyclables, aux préoccupations environnementales ou aux vélos électriques. Faites une comparaison plus précise avec l’Europe et utilisez des mots de liaison comme « because » et « unlike ».

Exemplo: Yes, bikes have become quite popular in my country over the last few years. More people are cycling because it is affordable, healthy, and environmentally friendly. However, unlike in many European countries, cycling is still not the main form of transport here.

× Yes, when I was uh a child, I uh, play with uh many things.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I played with many things.

Because the question asks about your childhood, you need to use the past tense. The past form of play is played.

× My father were in my birthday, uh 11, he buy me uh a bike.

✓ When I was 11, my father bought me a bike.

The verb buy must be changed to its past-tense form, bought, because this event happened in the past. The original sentence also has an unclear structure, so When I was 11 makes the meaning clearer.

× My father were in my birthday, uh 11, he buy me uh a bike.

✓ When I was 11, my father bought me a bike.

The subject father is singular, so the verb be would need to be was, not were. However, bought is the appropriate verb here because you mean that your father purchased the bike.

× I remember it's like uh red and uh with the new cha cha's.

✓ I remember that it was red and had new tires.

When describing a bike in the past, use was instead of is. The verb have should be in the past form had. The unclear expression cha cha's has been interpreted as tires.

× Yes bike it is popular in my country in a few years in the last few years because it's a new culture in our mind, not like European people.

✓ Yes, bikes have become popular in my country over the last few years because cycling is a new part of our culture, unlike in Europe.

Use the plural noun bikes when speaking about bicycles in general. Also, the phrase a new culture in our mind is unnatural; a new part of our culture is clearer. Use in Europe rather than like European people when making this comparison.

× Yes bike it is popular in my country in a few years in the last few years because it's a new culture in our mind, not like European people.

✓ Yes, bikes have become popular in my country over the last few years because cycling is a new part of our culture, unlike in Europe.

The phrase over the last few years describes a change that began in the past and continues now, so the present perfect have become is more suitable than is popular. The plural subject bikes also requires the plural verb form have.