Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer directly in the past tense: say that you did not have a bike. Avoid repeating “bike” and “did not have,” and replace fillers such as “umm” and “uh” with a short pause. Use a linking word such as “although” or “however” to connect your answer to the reason or dream. Also, say “in my childhood” or “when I was a child,” not “in my childhood” with the present-tense phrase “I do not have.”

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I really wanted one because I dreamed of riding it to school every day. Unfortunately, my parents couldn’t afford to buy me one at the time.

Sugestão: Give a complete answer and avoid ending mid-sentence. The phrase “mostly in place site” is unclear; specify where bikes are popular, such as “in rural areas” or “in smaller towns.” Use correct agreement: “there are lots of cars and buses,” and avoid saying both “lots of transportation” and listing examples because it is repetitive. Explain the contrast clearly: bikes may be more popular in rural areas because urban areas have many cars and buses. Reduce fillers and include one specific reason or example.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas and smaller towns. In large cities, however, many people use cars and buses because public transportation is widely available. Bikes are still common among children and people who want an inexpensive way to travel short distances.

× Not really, I do not have umm bike in my childhood but uh, it was my dream to go to school riding a bike but unfortunately I did not have.

✓ Not really, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but it was my dream to ride a bike to school. Unfortunately, I did not have one.

The question asks about a past experience, so use the past tense did not have instead of the present tense do not have. Use when I was a child to refer clearly to that past period.

× Not really, I do not have umm bike in my childhood but uh, it was my dream to go to school riding a bike but unfortunately I did not have.

✓ Not really, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but it was my dream to ride a bike to school. Unfortunately, I did not have one.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a bike when mentioning a bike for the first time.

× Yes, indeed, bikes are actually popular in our country, mostly in place site because in urban area, uh, there is lots of cars and buses and umm, lots of uh, transportation are available. Therefore, uh, parents are very.

✓ Yes, indeed, bikes are actually popular in our country, mostly in urban areas, because there are lots of cars and buses, and lots of transportation is available. Therefore, parents are very concerned about their children's safety.

Urban areas refers generally to more than one urban area, so use the plural form areas. Use plural nouns when speaking about urban areas in general.

× Yes, indeed, bikes are actually popular in our country, mostly in place site because in urban area, uh, there is lots of cars and buses and umm, lots of uh, transportation are available. Therefore, uh, parents are very.

✓ Yes, indeed, bikes are actually popular in our country, mostly in urban areas, because there are lots of cars and buses, and lots of transportation is available. Therefore, parents are very concerned about their children's safety.

In a there-be construction, the verb agrees with the noun that follows it. Because cars and buses is plural, use there are instead of there is.

× Yes, indeed, bikes are actually popular in our country, mostly in place site because in urban area, uh, there is lots of cars and buses and umm, lots of uh, transportation are available. Therefore, uh, parents are very.

✓ Yes, indeed, bikes are actually popular in our country, mostly in urban areas, because there are lots of cars and buses, and lots of transportation is available. Therefore, parents are very concerned about their children's safety.

Transportation is generally an uncountable singular noun, so it takes the singular verb is, not are. Remember to check whether the subject is singular, plural, or uncountable before choosing the verb.

× Yes, indeed, bikes are actually popular in our country, mostly in place site because in urban area, uh, there is lots of cars and buses and umm, lots of uh, transportation are available. Therefore, uh, parents are very.

✓ Yes, indeed, bikes are actually popular in our country, mostly in urban areas, because there are lots of cars and buses, and lots of transportation is available. Therefore, parents are very concerned about their children's safety.

Parents are very is incomplete because the adjective very needs a following adjective or complement. Complete the sentence with a meaningful phrase, such as very concerned about their children's safety.